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伪俳句之风花雪月

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Posted: 2007-12-01 12:24:12 Post subject: 伪俳句之风花雪月

伪俳句之风花雪月 12.1, 2007 ================ 风狂吹静坐者钻进胸膛，就顿作风中的落叶 ================ 花看那只蝴蝶左翻右舞了一季却从未栖落 ================ 雪自落上红唇过了三千秋与夏仍度化不去 ================ 月你照过李白今夜让你照照我就心不在焉 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-12-01 12:31:15 Post subject:

KK作业，不得不作。哈哈。记不得上次写东西是哪个猴年马月了。耗时数小时，绞尽我脑汁另，我也来连说带比划风：狂风中静坐者，胸中有更大风暴。雪：红唇之冷。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-12-01 12:43:40 Post subject:

先叫个好！给人以遐想的空间。 _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

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Posted: 2007-12-01 12:52:25 Post subject:

快呀你，我还在改着呢 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

迪拜
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Posted: 2007-12-01 19:24:01 Post subject:

看来，还是不错的

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Posted: 2007-12-01 20:28:03 Post subject:

谢谢迪拜，看来能过关了，哈哈。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-12-01 20:29:53 Post subject:

幽默, 还行需再烧三天香

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Posted: 2007-12-01 20:31:16 Post subject:

挺不错的，尤其最后一首。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2007-12-01 20:33:56 Post subject:

谢白水和杯中冲浪。好歹就这样交差了，写的再好也没人给钱。。。再写就失业了我。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-12-01 20:42:33 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

谢白水和杯中冲浪。好歹就这样交差了，写的再好也没人给钱。。。再写就失业了我。 Laughing

失业是你的福, 不要再打工自己当老板. 继续好好写 Very Happy

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Posted: 2007-12-01 20:59:36 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

失业是你的福, 不要再打工自己当老板. 继续好好写 Very Happy

有道理。那些偷啊抢啊骗啊的，都是自己当老板嘿！就是没注册。 Laughing

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Posted: 2007-12-01 21:06:10 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

失业是你的福, 不要再打工自己当老板. 继续好好写 Very Happy

有道理。那些偷啊抢啊骗啊的，都是自己当老板嘿！就是没注册。 Laughing

在加拿大注册公司是很简单的, 在中国注册也很方便. 你怎么能说人家自己当老板就是偷啊抢啊骗啊呢?

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Posted: 2007-12-01 21:42:44 Post subject:

误会。我可没认为自己当老板就是偷啊抢啊骗啊。只是顺便想到，偷啊抢啊骗啊也是自己当老板，就是不敢去注册。我自己当年也个体户啊，哈哈，男同学中有一半自己当老板呢。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-12-01 21:47:02 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

误会。我可没认为自己当老板就是偷啊抢啊骗啊。只是顺便想到，偷啊抢啊骗啊也是自己当老板，就是不敢去注册。我自己当年也个体户啊，哈哈，男同学中有一半自己当老板呢。 Laughing

真不敢信, 象你这么聪明的人下了海还有回头的. 还不赶紧把生意作大点, 多捐点款给<北美枫> Very Happy

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Posted: 2007-12-01 22:14:30 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

真不敢信, 象你这么聪明的人下了海还有回头的. 还不赶紧把生意作大点, 多捐点款给<北美枫> Very Happy

我不行，不聪明。做不了。个个都欠钱，就我自己垫着担风险。。。我还是老老实实给人打工好了。不操心 Laughing

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Posted: 2007-12-02 05:54:39 Post subject:

作业不错啊，上了个台阶，学绯句～后一首幽默哈

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Posted: 2007-12-02 07:43:54 Post subject:

勉强交差吧，真够辛苦的。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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