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少年游.感怀五首
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PostPosted: 2007-11-26 07:15:11    Post subject: 少年游.感怀五首 Reply with quote

少年游.感怀一
一帘暮色锁兰舟,烟柳亦温柔。轻风私语,闲云漫步,心事怎如秋?
天涯漂泊离乡久,泪影剪双眸。说是还非,求因先果,写乱少年游。



少年游.感怀二
万般心事付轻舟,逝水写温柔。偷风弄曲,邀云共舞,对影度春秋。
闲情脉脉今留住,浅笑锁明眸。醉意红尘,放怀四海,不枉少年游。



少年游.感怀三
闲情不断寄兰舟,暮色掩温柔。和风拂柳,柳梢欺月,争个好清秋。
诗书难写此中意,醉意锁双眸。如是河山,万千秀色,岂负少年游?



少年游.感怀四
倾情韵海似浮舟,纸上写温柔。交朋识友,吟诗作对,得意各千秋。
三分愁绪今何在?昨夜向东流。心鉴明清,意追宋唐,笑傲少年游。


少年游.感怀五
三千妙句渡一舟,此际竞风流。清歌待放,豪情速写,得意几春秋。
闲云知晓韵中客,舒卷锁明眸。处处从容,时时散淡,寄寓少年游。
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PostPosted: 2007-11-26 08:48:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

越写越撒洒脱,越读越入神。
问好暗香!
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PostPosted: 2007-11-26 14:46:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

好个少年游,不负此春秋。欣赏。
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PostPosted: 2007-11-26 17:34:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

潇洒大气,暗香飘逸。万里天涯路,不负少年游!问好!
感怀一:离乡心乱少年游;
感怀二:轻松放怀少年游;
感怀三:闲情不断少年游;
感怀四:吟诗交友少年游;
感怀五:清歌豪情少年游!
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PostPosted: 2007-11-26 18:00:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

灵动潇洒. 问好暗香
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PostPosted: 2007-11-26 23:33:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清 wrote:
越写越撒洒脱,越读越入神。
问好暗香!


谢谢老师鼓励。多指教。
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PostPosted: 2007-11-26 23:34:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
好个少年游,不负此春秋。欣赏。


谢谢老师。
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PostPosted: 2007-11-26 23:35:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
潇洒大气,暗香飘逸。万里天涯路,不负少年游!问好!
感怀一:离乡心乱少年游;
感怀二:轻松放怀少年游;
感怀三:闲情不断少年游;
感怀四:吟诗交友少年游;
感怀五:清歌豪情少年游!


多多指教.上茶.
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PostPosted: 2007-11-26 23:35:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
灵动潇洒. 问好暗香


谢谢白水鼓励。更喜欢你的作品。
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