暗香如沁 秀才
Joined: 14 Jan 2007 Posts: 885 Location: 北京 暗香如沁Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-26 07:15:11 Post subject: 少年游.感怀五首 |
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少年游.感怀一
一帘暮色锁兰舟,烟柳亦温柔。轻风私语,闲云漫步,心事怎如秋?
天涯漂泊离乡久,泪影剪双眸。说是还非,求因先果,写乱少年游。
少年游.感怀二
万般心事付轻舟,逝水写温柔。偷风弄曲,邀云共舞,对影度春秋。
闲情脉脉今留住,浅笑锁明眸。醉意红尘,放怀四海,不枉少年游。
少年游.感怀三
闲情不断寄兰舟,暮色掩温柔。和风拂柳,柳梢欺月,争个好清秋。
诗书难写此中意,醉意锁双眸。如是河山,万千秀色,岂负少年游?
少年游.感怀四
倾情韵海似浮舟,纸上写温柔。交朋识友,吟诗作对,得意各千秋。
三分愁绪今何在?昨夜向东流。心鉴明清,意追宋唐,笑傲少年游。
少年游.感怀五
三千妙句渡一舟,此际竞风流。清歌待放,豪情速写,得意几春秋。
闲云知晓韵中客,舒卷锁明眸。处处从容,时时散淡,寄寓少年游。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~ |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
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Posted: 2007-11-26 08:48:57 Post subject: |
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越写越撒洒脱,越读越入神。
问好暗香! |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-26 14:46:58 Post subject: |
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好个少年游,不负此春秋。欣赏。 _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2007-11-26 17:34:38 Post subject: |
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潇洒大气,暗香飘逸。万里天涯路,不负少年游!问好!
感怀一:离乡心乱少年游;
感怀二:轻松放怀少年游;
感怀三:闲情不断少年游;
感怀四:吟诗交友少年游;
感怀五:清歌豪情少年游! |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-26 18:00:37 Post subject: |
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| 灵动潇洒. 问好暗香 |
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暗香如沁 秀才
Joined: 14 Jan 2007 Posts: 885 Location: 北京 暗香如沁Collection |
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暗香如沁 秀才
Joined: 14 Jan 2007 Posts: 885 Location: 北京 暗香如沁Collection |
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暗香如沁 秀才
Joined: 14 Jan 2007 Posts: 885 Location: 北京 暗香如沁Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-26 23:35:18 Post subject: |
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| qinghongh wrote: |
潇洒大气,暗香飘逸。万里天涯路,不负少年游!问好!
感怀一:离乡心乱少年游;
感怀二:轻松放怀少年游;
感怀三:闲情不断少年游;
感怀四:吟诗交友少年游;
感怀五:清歌豪情少年游! |
多多指教.上茶. _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~ |
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暗香如沁 秀才
Joined: 14 Jan 2007 Posts: 885 Location: 北京 暗香如沁Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-26 23:35:58 Post subject: |
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| 白水 Moonlight wrote: |
| 灵动潇洒. 问好暗香 |
谢谢白水鼓励。更喜欢你的作品。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~ |
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