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致某君

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Posted: 2007-11-18 10:01:17 Post subject: 致某君

致某君你说想离开文字在写完这最后的一片后偏那一地的尸叶又揪着你的眼睛以死的纯真质态倔强地升起诗行翩翩你若抛弃了她她她必成为别人的爱你说痛苦难熬, 你说许多诗人靠着一个读者活着你一个都无那么, 请再看看那尸叶, 且不说过去有人”花一个世纪来等待读者“ 注: 1. 词的分段称分片,上段叫“上片”,下段叫“下片”。 2. 埃德加·爱伦·坡（Edgar Allan Poe 他在《我发现了》(Eureka) 中写道：“我可以花一个世纪来等待读者……”。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

子花
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Posted: 2007-11-18 10:12:00 Post subject:

尸叶--有意思！

白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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Posted: 2007-11-18 10:59:10 Post subject:

你说痛苦难熬, 你说许多诗人靠着一个读者活着你一个都无你的实验看来在接近成功,新的开发又快开始了为了我们喜爱的诗歌, 让我们都来作一个读者

kokho
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Joined: 30 Nov 2006
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Posted: 2007-11-18 11:08:06 Post subject:

. mark 这首很多人看得懂了：）。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

戴玨
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Posted: 2007-11-18 14:18:19 Post subject: Re: 致某君

博弈 wrote:

你说痛苦难熬, 你说
许多诗人靠着一个读者活着
你一个都无

有些詩人不靠讀者而活，寫詩對他們來說只是出於抒發思想感情的需要。
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hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-11-18 14:24:16 Post subject:

有点意思 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

Lake
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Posted: 2007-11-18 15:45:21 Post subject:

呵呵，有深意呢。我知道博弈写诗就不顾及读者，但也期望读者评呢。 _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

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Posted: 2007-11-18 20:46:06 Post subject:

这是写给一位最近在苦思小说的朋友（想到或许有旁人也一样，就回在这里），希望你走出来。回头说，写诗不管读者，评诗不管写者，这在网上还可以。这‘不管’二字有些太过，但矫枉过正有时并不会过正，因为这枉是矫不了的。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2007-11-18 22:01:31 Post subject:

Lake wrote:

呵呵，有深意呢。我知道博弈写诗就不顾及读者，但也期望读者评呢。

说的倒是。这让我想起一位京剧票友说的话，角儿在台上只为一个人唱做，听不见别的掌声，不知真假。创作里寻知音原就是大海捞针的事。好的创作，不好的创作，都在寻知音。我主要来协助大家创作的，不是诗人。
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游旋1
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Posted: 2007-11-19 00:30:37 Post subject:

这个片不错!但最后看懂,欣赏了 _________________ 用文字结缘拿鸿雁对话

山城子
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Posted: 2007-11-19 07:13:54 Post subject:

你若抛弃了她她她必成为别人的爱 ——诗歌也一样！ ——雅伴儿哩！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

白水
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Posted: 2007-11-19 20:37:23 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

Lake wrote:

呵呵，有深意呢。我知道博弈写诗就不顾及读者，但也期望读者评呢。

说的倒是。这让我想起一位京剧票友说的话，角儿在台上只为一个人唱做，听不见别的掌声，不知真假。创作里寻知音原就是大海捞针的事。好的创作，不好的创作，都在寻知音。我主要来协助大家创作的，不是诗人。

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