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《空》、《缄默的理由》、《编织》

荷梦
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Posted: 2007-11-26 05:57:06 Post subject: 《空》、《缄默的理由》、《编织》

《空》 1 窗外的歌声含糊、悲凄挤去屋内仅存的宁静墙上，一片雪白 2 这样的日暮:空巢，孤鸟没有鸣叫，没有张望只有静静的凉凉的空守着窗守到黑《缄默的理由》卑微,藏匿在角落不合时宜的晾晒是免不了,遭遇阴雨所以,选择缄默选择睁眼天亮，闭眼天黑《编织》这些日子，我一直忙于编织那弯曲的旧针牵引着新毛线其实，与我的双脚拖着眼前的时光没什么两样所不同的，仅仅只是结局

古井
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Posted: 2007-11-26 07:10:20 Post subject:

编织》这些日子，我一直忙于编织那弯曲的旧针牵引着新毛线其实，与我的双脚拖着眼前的时光没什么两样所不同的，仅仅只是结局这个好，有空间！

游旋1
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Posted: 2007-11-26 07:57:23 Post subject:

几个都不错，欣赏 _________________ 用文字结缘拿鸿雁对话

白水
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Posted: 2007-11-26 18:39:12 Post subject:

荷梦, 为何让我读出了伤感, 你还好吗?

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-11-26 19:26:12 Post subject:

《编织》这些日子，我一直忙于编织那弯曲的旧针牵引着新毛线其实，与我的双脚拖着眼前的时光没什么两样所不同的，仅仅只是结局这首没读过，很不错~问好荷梦~

kokho
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Posted: 2007-11-27 12:15:20 Post subject:

。难得　哲思精深　：）早说你有　慧根　！！！。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-11-27 17:23:28 Post subject:

喜　第一首。《空》 1 窗外的歌声含糊、悲凄挤去屋内仅存的宁静墙上，一片雪白 2 这样的日暮:空巢，孤鸟没有鸣叫，没有张望只有静静的凉凉的空守着窗守到黑 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-11-27 18:12:57 Post subject:

似乎有点忧伤。忧郁是诗歌的气质之一。可增加美感。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

荷梦
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Posted: 2007-11-28 05:10:25 Post subject:

谢谢朋友们评阅！回白水，谢谢关心，十一月来很少写，一个月就写这几个了。偶尔的情绪流露，没什么的。我不是在文字里说了，最近在忙着编织吗？织毛衣，但电视，呵呵，这就是我近来的生活。

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