| 山城子 榜眼
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2007-11-12 07:02:42    Post subject: 七绝·踏叶 |   |  
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				| 七绝·踏叶 文/ 山城子
 
 初冬时节叶纷飞,
 跌落哗哗撞铁扉。
 邀我步闲诗意踏,
 喜溶明媚胜春晖。
 
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-11-12 15:45:24    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 生动, 豪爽. 喜欢 |  | 
	
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		| qinghongh 榜眼
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2007-11-12 17:34:33    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 先生好诗! |  | 
	
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		| 山城子 榜眼
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2007-11-16 07:59:43    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 问好白水! 问好庆红!
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 诗是人生的雅伴儿。
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		| 晓松 举人
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-11-18 15:10:08    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 跌落哗哗撞铁扉。有气势! |  | 
	
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		| 山城子 榜眼
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2007-11-20 06:47:29    Post subject: |   |  
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 谢谢晓松光临!
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