山城子 榜眼
Joined: 23 May 2007 Posts: 4771 Location: 中国贵州 山城子Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-12 07:02:42 Post subject: 七绝·踏叶 |
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七绝·踏叶
文/ 山城子
初冬时节叶纷飞,
跌落哗哗撞铁扉。
邀我步闲诗意踏,
喜溶明媚胜春晖。
2007-11-12 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-12 15:45:24 Post subject: |
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生动, 豪爽. 喜欢 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
Posted: 2007-11-12 17:34:33 Post subject: |
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先生好诗! |
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山城子 榜眼
Joined: 23 May 2007 Posts: 4771 Location: 中国贵州 山城子Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-16 07:59:43 Post subject: |
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问好白水!
问好庆红! _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。 |
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晓松 举人

Joined: 26 Feb 2007 Posts: 1192
晓松Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-18 15:10:08 Post subject: |
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跌落哗哗撞铁扉。有气势! |
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山城子 榜眼
Joined: 23 May 2007 Posts: 4771 Location: 中国贵州 山城子Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-20 06:47:29 Post subject: |
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谢谢晓松光临! |
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