莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2007-10-02 17:39:23 Post subject: 五绝-梦笔生花 |
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晓梦山中静,闲情笔墨倾。
雾消峰外去,风至水相迎。 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-10-02 17:45:14 Post subject: |
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MM心静诗也静. 问好 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2007-10-03 00:34:06 Post subject: |
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白水 Moonlight wrote: |
MM心静诗也静. 问好 |
问好JJ 谢谢JJ点评! |
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南北客 童生
Joined: 20 Jun 2007 Posts: 22
南北客Collection |
Posted: 2007-10-04 09:30:43 Post subject: |
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这首比《湖畔赏景》好多了。试步韵和:
诗求知己会,酒为故人倾。
冰碎台阶外,蓬头倒履迎。 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2007-10-04 16:45:15 Post subject: |
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和莹雪《梦笔生花〉
静穆云山立
兰天大墨倾
花开香碧落
好梦庆相迎 _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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敦智 童生
Joined: 18 Jun 2007 Posts: 40
敦智Collection |
Posted: 2007-10-05 08:30:17 Post subject: |
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欣赏。 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2007-10-06 19:54:36 Post subject: |
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南北客 wrote: |
这首比《湖畔赏景》好多了。试步韵和:
诗求知己会,酒为故人倾。
冰碎台阶外,蓬头倒履迎。 |
回和
寻律诗文会,逢朋玉液倾。
雅心冰雪外,千里似邻迎。 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2007-10-06 20:03:22 Post subject: |
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回和
仰慕群峰立
秋空靛色倾
岭花娇未落
枫叶醉人迎
黄洋界 wrote: |
和莹雪《梦笔生花〉
静穆云山立
兰天大墨倾
花开香碧落
好梦庆相迎 |
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