莹雪 进士出身
 
  Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection | 
		
		
			
				 Posted: 2007-10-02 17:39:23    Post subject: 五绝-梦笔生花 | 
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晓梦山中静,闲情笔墨倾。
 
雾消峰外去,风至水相迎。 | 
			 
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		白水 大学士
  
  Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection | 
		
		
			
				 Posted: 2007-10-02 17:45:14    Post subject:  | 
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				| MM心静诗也静. 问好 | 
			 
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		莹雪 进士出身
 
  Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection | 
		
		
			
				 Posted: 2007-10-03 00:34:06    Post subject:  | 
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	  | 白水 Moonlight wrote: | 
	 
	
	  | MM心静诗也静. 问好 | 
	 
 
问好JJ   谢谢JJ点评! | 
			 
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		南北客 童生
 
  Joined: 20 Jun 2007 Posts: 22
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				 Posted: 2007-10-04 09:30:43    Post subject:  | 
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				这首比《湖畔赏景》好多了。试步韵和:
 
 
诗求知己会,酒为故人倾。
 
冰碎台阶外,蓬头倒履迎。 | 
			 
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		黄洋界 探花
  
  Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection | 
		
		
			
				 Posted: 2007-10-04 16:45:15    Post subject:  | 
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				和莹雪《梦笔生花〉
 
 
静穆云山立
 
 
兰天大墨倾
 
 
花开香碧落
 
 
好梦庆相迎 _________________ ++++++++++++++
 
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 | 
			 
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		敦智 童生
 
  Joined: 18 Jun 2007 Posts: 40
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				 Posted: 2007-10-05 08:30:17    Post subject:  | 
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				| 欣赏。 | 
			 
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		莹雪 进士出身
 
  Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection | 
		
		
			
				 Posted: 2007-10-06 19:54:36    Post subject:  | 
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	  | 南北客 wrote: | 
	 
	
	  这首比《湖畔赏景》好多了。试步韵和:
 
 
诗求知己会,酒为故人倾。
 
冰碎台阶外,蓬头倒履迎。 | 
	 
 
 
回和
 
寻律诗文会,逢朋玉液倾。
 
雅心冰雪外,千里似邻迎。 | 
			 
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		莹雪 进士出身
 
  Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection | 
		
		
			
				 Posted: 2007-10-06 20:03:22    Post subject:  | 
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				回和
 
 
仰慕群峰立
 
 
秋空靛色倾
 
 
岭花娇未落
 
 
枫叶醉人迎
 
 
	  | 黄洋界 wrote: | 
	 
	
	  和莹雪《梦笔生花〉
 
 
静穆云山立
 
 
兰天大墨倾
 
 
花开香碧落
 
 
好梦庆相迎 | 
	 
 
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