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<<呼喊>>

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Posted: 2007-09-18 15:29:18 Post subject: <<呼喊>>

呼喊一不做天空的花朵月亮是草原上空的云雀也不做高山雪莲月亮是冰峰之巅的大鸟它飞向长空向更远的山越飞越冷在飞翔中隐没翅膀它的那银色的白光二一滴水是透明的虫子在绿叶上爬来爬去一只草菇是大地的耳朵在倾听雨点的脚步走了多远一匹马是草原上的飞矢它在量着牧歌与冬天的距离而我只是被丢弃了的经验哭泣着远离新世界 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-09-18 16:56:27 Post subject:

清新灵气舒服

下一个偶像是野兽
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Posted: 2007-09-18 19:12:47 Post subject:

呵呵，最近比较善感。问好少君 _________________ 我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1251343504

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Posted: 2007-09-18 20:14:08 Post subject:

仲秋将临, 月亮引起潮夕

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Posted: 2007-09-18 20:37:25 Post subject:

下一个偶像是野兽 wrote:

呵呵，最近比较善感。
问好少君

同意。不过这才像个诗人 Laughing

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I'm nobody! Who are you?

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-09-18 23:31:23 Post subject:

谢谢迪拜下一个偶像是野兽白水 Moonlight nobody 各位关注.本人常常为自己诗歌的没有新异而苦恼. 有情绪而找不到最佳的表达方式就是''功夫''不到. 为什么强调诗到语言止,其实就是还有技巧可言.愿与各位共勉! _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

sgb
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Posted: 2007-09-18 23:48:44 Post subject:

第二首有新意,问好!

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-09-19 08:33:48 Post subject:

弯月有翅膀，好想象～而我只是被丢弃了的经验哭泣着远离新世界喜欢这几句～问好少君！

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Posted: 2007-09-19 11:10:28 Post subject:

你现在才知道少君这阵与已往不同? _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/sowhy

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Posted: 2007-09-22 05:12:53 Post subject:

而我只是被丢弃了的经验哭泣着远离新世界 ——这是怎样的情感呢？唉！

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Posted: 2007-09-22 05:57:00 Post subject:

一滴水是透明的虫子在绿叶上爬来爬去这比喻形象生动！ _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

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Posted: 2007-09-22 07:07:07 Post subject:

而我只是被丢弃了的经验哭泣着远离新世界我也喜欢这些句子的感觉，问好诗人 _________________ 个人主页：http://blog.sina.com.cn/afirewang

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