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矿井的眼睛

白水
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Posted: 2007-08-27 06:42:07 Post subject: 矿井的眼睛

矿井的眼睛远方传来哭声在风中黑色的云托着 166双眼睛盯住了那只罪恶的手 166条火一样的生命难道象煤渣, 随意断送矿难不断, 令人发指, 贴首旧作.

阿依琼裙
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Posted: 2007-08-27 07:39:03 Post subject:

简短有力！ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

赵福治
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Posted: 2007-08-27 08:58:05 Post subject:

洗练中读出痛.

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-08-27 10:13:26 Post subject: Re: 矿井的眼睛

白水 Moonlight wrote:

矿井的眼睛

远方
传来哭声
在风中
黑色的云托着
166双眼睛

盯住了
那只罪恶的
手

166条
火一样的生命
难道象煤渣, 随意
断送

矿难不断, 令人发指, 贴首旧作.

中国就是这样，人命成了最贱的～ Sad

kokho
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Posted: 2007-08-27 12:18:23 Post subject:

拜读：）。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

新华
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Posted: 2007-08-27 21:25:24 Post subject:

简短有力。

白水
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Posted: 2007-08-28 07:19:08 Post subject:

谢谢各位朋友, 这首诗歌是当初是为铜川煤矿矿难而作,几年了,矿难不减,天灾?人祸? 令人痛惜.

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Posted: 2007-08-28 08:26:10 Post subject:

疼！！！痛！！！ _________________ 我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/wfzhujianxia

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Posted: 2007-08-28 15:09:40 Post subject:

看完这首诗，心很疼。觉得无言。问候白水诗人。喜欢你这样的关注。敬礼！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

白水
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Posted: 2007-08-28 18:51:51 Post subject:

谢谢瀑布, 海军. 同感.

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Posted: 2010-04-08 18:10:44 Post subject:

矿难频频，提一首旧作

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Posted: 2010-04-09 19:11:14 Post subject:

上头以人为本下头以人为末 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2010-04-09 19:20:19 Post subject:

洗练中读出痛. _________________ 陕西姜华

白水
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Posted: 2010-04-10 17:23:39 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

上头以人为本
下头以人为末

谢谢老师。你的回帖令人深思。

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Posted: 2010-04-10 17:24:08 Post subject:

江南雨 wrote:

洗练中读出痛.

问好雨。

四一果
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Posted: 2010-04-10 22:22:12 Post subject:

痛感绝非矮小无力

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