白水 大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-27 06:42:07 Post subject: 矿井的眼睛 |
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矿井的眼睛
远方
传来哭声
在风中
黑色的云托着
166双眼睛
盯住了
那只罪恶的
手
166条
火一样的生命
难道象煤渣, 随意
断送
矿难不断, 令人发指, 贴首旧作. |
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阿依琼裙 秀才
Joined: 09 Apr 2007 Posts: 920 Location: 废墟之上 阿依琼裙Collection |
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赵福治 探花
Joined: 30 May 2006 Posts: 3456 Location: 中国北京 赵福治Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-27 08:58:05 Post subject: |
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洗练中读出痛. |
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半溪明月 榜眼
Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
半溪明月Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-27 10:13:26 Post subject: Re: 矿井的眼睛 |
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白水 Moonlight wrote: |
矿井的眼睛
远方
传来哭声
在风中
黑色的云托着
166双眼睛
盯住了
那只罪恶的
手
166条
火一样的生命
难道象煤渣, 随意
断送
矿难不断, 令人发指, 贴首旧作. |
中国就是这样,人命成了最贱的~ |
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kokho 进士出身
Joined: 30 Nov 2006 Posts: 2642 Location: Singapore kokhoCollection |
Posted: 2007-08-27 12:18:23 Post subject: |
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拜读 :)
。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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新华 秀才
Joined: 29 Jul 2007 Posts: 225
新华Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-27 21:25:24 Post subject: |
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简短有力。 |
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白水 大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-28 07:19:08 Post subject: |
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谢谢各位朋友, 这首诗歌是当初是为铜川煤矿矿难而作,几年了,矿难不减,天灾?人祸? 令人痛惜. |
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黑发瀑布 童生
Joined: 19 Mar 2007 Posts: 28
黑发瀑布Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-28 08:26:10 Post subject: |
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疼!!!痛!!! _________________ 我的博客:http://blog.sina.com.cn/wfzhujianxia |
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杨海军 进士出身
Joined: 01 Mar 2007 Posts: 2205 Location: 吉林 杨海军Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-28 15:09:40 Post subject: |
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看完这首诗,心很疼。觉得无言。
问候白水诗人。喜欢你这样的关注。敬礼! _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751 |
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白水 大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-28 18:51:51 Post subject: |
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谢谢瀑布, 海军. 同感. |
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白水 大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2010-04-08 18:10:44 Post subject: |
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矿难频频,提一首旧作 |
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山城子 榜眼
Joined: 23 May 2007 Posts: 4771 Location: 中国贵州 山城子Collection |
Posted: 2010-04-09 19:11:14 Post subject: |
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上头以人为本
下头以人为末 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。 |
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江南雨 秀才
Joined: 03 Jul 2009 Posts: 627 Location: 中国陕西省 江南雨Collection |
Posted: 2010-04-09 19:20:19 Post subject: |
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洗练中读出痛. _________________ 陕西姜华 |
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白水 大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2010-04-10 17:23:39 Post subject: |
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谢谢老师。你的回帖令人深思。 |
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白水 大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2010-04-10 17:24:08 Post subject: |
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问好雨。 |
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四一果 童生
Joined: 13 Mar 2010 Posts: 43
四一果Collection |
Posted: 2010-04-10 22:22:12 Post subject: |
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痛感绝非矮小无力 |
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