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矿井的眼睛
白水
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PostPosted: 2007-08-27 06:42:07    Post subject: 矿井的眼睛 Reply with quote

矿井的眼睛

远方
传来哭声
在风中
黑色的云托着
166双眼睛

盯住了
那只罪恶的


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火一样的生命
难道象煤渣, 随意
断送

矿难不断, 令人发指, 贴首旧作.
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阿依琼裙
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PostPosted: 2007-08-27 07:39:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

简短有力!
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踏过废墟,走来
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2007-08-27 08:58:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

洗练中读出痛.
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2007-08-27 10:13:26    Post subject: Re: 矿井的眼睛 Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
矿井的眼睛

远方
传来哭声
在风中
黑色的云托着
166双眼睛

盯住了
那只罪恶的


166条
火一样的生命
难道象煤渣, 随意
断送

矿难不断, 令人发指, 贴首旧作.


中国就是这样,人命成了最贱的~ Sad
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kokho
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PostPosted: 2007-08-27 12:18:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

拜读 :)

。。
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乒乓、摄影、诗歌
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新华
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PostPosted: 2007-08-27 21:25:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

简短有力。
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-08-28 07:19:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢各位朋友, 这首诗歌是当初是为铜川煤矿矿难而作,几年了,矿难不减,天灾?人祸? 令人痛惜.
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黑发瀑布
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PostPosted: 2007-08-28 08:26:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

疼!!!痛!!!
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杨海军
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PostPosted: 2007-08-28 15:09:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

看完这首诗,心很疼。觉得无言。
问候白水诗人。喜欢你这样的关注。敬礼!
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-08-28 18:51:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢瀑布, 海军. 同感.
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PostPosted: 2010-04-08 18:10:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

矿难频频,提一首旧作
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山城子
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PostPosted: 2010-04-09 19:11:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

上头以人为本
下头以人为末
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诗是人生的雅伴儿。
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江南雨
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PostPosted: 2010-04-09 19:20:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

洗练中读出痛.
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白水
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PostPosted: 2010-04-10 17:23:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

山城子 wrote:
上头以人为本
下头以人为末


谢谢老师。你的回帖令人深思。
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PostPosted: 2010-04-10 17:24:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

江南雨 wrote:
洗练中读出痛.


问好雨。
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四一果
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PostPosted: 2010-04-10 22:22:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

痛感绝非矮小无力
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