莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-24 17:21:11 Post subject: 七绝-秋趣 |
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晨风盈袖送清凉,
曼妙银杏着盛装。
通达吟诗添意趣,
静心赏桂笑夕阳。 |
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晓松 举人

Joined: 26 Feb 2007 Posts: 1192
晓松Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-24 20:21:16 Post subject: |
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晨风盈袖,静心赏桂。
君赏桂,吾赏诗~ |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-25 06:36:21 Post subject: |
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晨风,盈袖 ,曼妙,盛装 。一派生机情趣。 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-25 16:18:10 Post subject: |
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晓松 wrote: |
晨风盈袖,静心赏桂。
君赏桂,吾赏诗~ |
谢谢点评~ |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-25 16:19:39 Post subject: |
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冰清 wrote: |
晨风,盈袖 ,曼妙,盛装 。一派生机情趣。 |
谢谢冰清老师评诗~ |
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