| 莹雪 进士出身
 
 
 Joined: 28 Sep 2006
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 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都
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				|  Posted: 2007-08-24 17:21:11    Post subject: 七绝-秋趣 |   |  
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				| 晨风盈袖送清凉, 曼妙银杏着盛装。
 通达吟诗添意趣,
 静心赏桂笑夕阳。
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		| 晓松 举人
 
  
 Joined: 26 Feb 2007
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				|  Posted: 2007-08-24 20:21:16    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 晨风盈袖,静心赏桂。 君赏桂,吾赏诗~
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		| 冰清 同进士出身
 
 
 Joined: 29 Mar 2007
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				|  Posted: 2007-08-25 06:36:21    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 晨风,盈袖 ,曼妙,盛装 。一派生机情趣。 |  | 
	
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		| 莹雪 进士出身
 
 
 Joined: 28 Sep 2006
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				|  Posted: 2007-08-25 16:18:10    Post subject: |   |  
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谢谢点评~ 
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	  | 晨风盈袖,静心赏桂。 君赏桂,吾赏诗~
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		| 莹雪 进士出身
 
 
 Joined: 28 Sep 2006
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				|  Posted: 2007-08-25 16:19:39    Post subject: |   |  
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谢谢冰清老师评诗~ 
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	  | 晨风,盈袖 ,曼妙,盛装 。一派生机情趣。 |  |  | 
	
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