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钟乳石

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Posted: 2007-08-24 10:54:40 Post subject: 钟乳石

钟乳石深埋于土的, 是你不愿吐露的心事那些冰冷, 那些坎坷我, 弃了真身只为遁入你不肯开启的门轻轻地触摸一根根逐渐愈合的断骨又一颗泪水滴下来远方五千年前的女子还在啜泣

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Posted: 2007-08-24 11:00:28 Post subject:

五千年前的你还记得那张照片呢 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-08-24 11:03:36 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

五千年前的
你还记得那张照片呢

哪张照片

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Posted: 2007-08-24 11:08:51 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

hepingdao wrote:

五千年前的
你还记得那张照片呢

哪张照片

5000年后,出土的两具骨架

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Posted: 2007-08-24 11:16:18 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

hepingdao wrote:

五千年前的
你还记得那张照片呢

哪张照片

5000年后,出土的两具骨架

哦, 我写诗时还真没想起那照片. Embarassed

你没去过张家界? 那钟乳石一根根的...... 你没看我把诗歌拉的长长的, 就是为了有点象形 Very Happy

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Posted: 2007-08-24 11:19:05 Post subject:

没去过,但我知道钟乳石,在其它地方见过 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-08-24 13:28:30 Post subject:

穿越时空，惊骇的触摸，灵魂似有惊悚！进入钟乳石，就进入了时光的缆车。好！此诗有种疼痛的美！！真能写啊。问候诗人。 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-08-24 23:09:41 Post subject:

看了海军的回复，我到不知道该说什么了～欣赏了，问好月光妹妹～

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-08-25 00:15:22 Post subject:

诗的形状就像写得贴切,形象. _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-08-25 02:12:41 Post subject:

这首确实不错。各个方面。整体均衡不乏佳句，如，我, 弃了真身只为遁入你不肯开启的门真能写。我呢，准备用 php （一种scriping 计算机语言) 写首诗 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-08-25 04:02:16 Post subject:

学习并问好。 _________________ syr@shiyanren.com 冷巉湖北省十堰市茅箭区三堰邮政小区48号信箱 442000

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Posted: 2007-08-25 07:25:24 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

没去过,但我知道钟乳石,在其它地方见过

我倒忘了, 这是你的老本行. Wink

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Posted: 2007-08-25 07:26:17 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

穿越时空，惊骇的触摸，灵魂似有惊悚！进入钟乳石，就进入了时光的缆车。好！此诗有种疼痛的美！！真能写啊。问候诗人。

谢谢理解.

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Posted: 2007-08-25 07:27:45 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

看了海军的回复，我到不知道该说什么了～欣赏了，问好月光妹妹～

问好月亮

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Posted: 2007-08-25 07:28:55 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

诗的形状就像

写得贴切,形象.

象吗? 谢谢少君

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Posted: 2007-08-25 07:30:25 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

这首确实不错。各个方面。
整体均衡不乏佳句，如，

我, 弃了真身
只为遁入
你不肯开启的门

真能写。
我呢，准备用 php （一种scriping 计算机语言) 写首诗 Very Happy

等你大作. 可不要COMPUTER造诗噢 Wink

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Posted: 2007-08-25 07:31:13 Post subject:

冷巉 wrote:

学习并问好。

问好冷巉.

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