| 千里 秀才
 
 
 Joined: 30 Jul 2007
 Posts: 135
 
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				|  Posted: 2007-08-09 23:47:58    Post subject: ◎我写的,诗 |   |  
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				| ◎我写的,诗 
 松手。
 放弃了写诗的日子
 
 夜很深
 日很长
 扑天盖地的无语
 含着,恨
 
 我不争
 四季,涂着最清楚的始末
 
 立秋
 立秋
 立秋总是垂着泪——说
 你们人多…
 
 红玫瑰白玫瑰,低声
 问,天良?
 2007.08.10  凌晨
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		| kokho 进士出身
 
  
 Joined: 30 Nov 2006
 Posts: 2642
 Location: Singapore
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				|  Posted: 2007-08-10 00:02:40    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 非常有魅力的文字表达 :) 
 问好 。。
 
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 乒乓、摄影、诗歌
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		| 赵福治 探花
 
  
 Joined: 30 May 2006
 Posts: 3456
 Location: 中国北京
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				|  Posted: 2007-08-11 23:27:52    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 松手。 放弃了写诗的日子 .
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		| 离家 童生
 
 
 Joined: 12 Aug 2007
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		| huamei 童生
 
 
 Joined: 12 Aug 2007
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				|  Posted: 2007-08-12 01:11:07    Post subject: |   |  
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		| 金金 进士出身
 
  
 Joined: 08 Feb 2007
 Posts: 2035
 Location: 山东济宁
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