千里 秀才
Joined: 30 Jul 2007 Posts: 135
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Posted: 2007-08-09 23:47:58 Post subject: ◎我写的,诗 |
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◎我写的,诗
松手。
放弃了写诗的日子
夜很深
日很长
扑天盖地的无语
含着,恨
我不争
四季,涂着最清楚的始末
立秋
立秋
立秋总是垂着泪——说
你们人多…
红玫瑰白玫瑰,低声
问,天良?
2007.08.10 凌晨 |
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kokho 进士出身

Joined: 30 Nov 2006 Posts: 2642 Location: Singapore kokhoCollection |
Posted: 2007-08-10 00:02:40 Post subject: |
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非常有魅力的文字表达 :)
问好 。。
。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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赵福治 探花

Joined: 30 May 2006 Posts: 3456 Location: 中国北京 赵福治Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-11 23:27:52 Post subject: |
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松手。
放弃了写诗的日子 . |
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离家 童生
Joined: 12 Aug 2007 Posts: 12
离家Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-12 00:50:56 Post subject: |
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huamei 童生
Joined: 12 Aug 2007 Posts: 13
huameiCollection |
Posted: 2007-08-12 01:11:07 Post subject: |
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金金 进士出身

Joined: 08 Feb 2007 Posts: 2035 Location: 山东济宁 金金Collection |
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