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爱松
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Posted: 2007-07-30 16:33:26 Post subject: 人民币

丢失在小西门美食城她走进来又走出去走出去又走进来反反复复叫喊着声调嘶哑的乡下母亲几乎让人分不清喊的是一个孩子还是一条狗路过一块地坐9路小中巴每天傍晚都要经过一块地这块仅存的空地上机器轰鸣、正在打桩四周已是楼盘高耸只有很少的花草和树随着钻头深入，一颤一颤很像死去多年的一些亲人，远远的朝我挥手，隔着深灰色档风玻璃同志 “你他妈的当我玻璃噶？叫先生！” 人民币老人家战战兢兢伸出双手脏污而枯瘦我掏出准备坐车的一元人民币认认真真递过去人民币被捏了捏在人民手心一直战战兢兢

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Posted: 2007-07-30 19:58:44 Post subject:

独特的感受，喜欢第一首。

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Posted: 2007-07-30 20:10:44 Post subject:

为弱势群体而歌. 好

爱松
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Posted: 2007-07-31 05:32:16 Post subject:

kino wrote:

独特的感受，喜欢第一首。

谢谢：）

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Posted: 2007-07-31 05:33:40 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

为弱势群体而歌. 好

问候：）

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Posted: 2007-07-31 14:00:44 Post subject:

覺得前兩首較好。 _________________ I labour by singing light 我的blog 我的專欄

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-07-31 16:16:40 Post subject:

人民币被捏了捏在人民手心一直战战兢兢很好 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2007-07-31 16:24:30 Post subject:

好！！！

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Posted: 2007-07-31 21:11:33 Post subject:

人民币老人家战战兢兢伸出双手脏污而枯瘦我掏出准备坐车的一元人民币认认真真递过去人民币被捏了捏在人民手心一直战战兢兢力透纸背.推荐! _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-08-01 17:29:16 Post subject:

戴玨 wrote:

覺得前兩首較好。

谢谢！

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Posted: 2007-08-01 20:00:48 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

人民币被捏了捏
在人民手心
一直战战兢兢

很好

问好！

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Posted: 2007-08-01 20:07:48 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

人民币

老人家战战兢兢
伸出双手
脏污而枯瘦

我掏出准备坐车的
一元人民币
认认真真递过去

人民币被捏了捏
在人民手心
一直战战兢兢

力透纸背.推荐!

感谢少君兄！请多指教。

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Posted: 2007-08-01 21:56:10 Post subject:

由于原帖子丢失，有几位朋友的回贴也不见了，特把博弈先生对《人民币》的译文复制过来： the old man timid 'n fearful reachinh out dirty 'n dried thin/ hand over my bus fare one dollar of people's note sincere, genuine/ people's bill squeezed heart out in hands old tears and fears

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Posted: 2007-08-01 21:57:31 Post subject: 人民币

海外逸士先生的译文： The old man's timid 'n' fearful Reaching out his hands Dirty, dried 'n' bony I pull out one yuan bill Intended for the fare Hand it over seriously The crumpled bill has passed From hand to hand Being also timid 'n' fearful

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Posted: 2007-08-01 22:12:55 Post subject:

喜欢《人民币》。 _________________ 写作吧：这是最佳的方式，让你阅读自己，聆听世界

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Posted: 2007-08-02 21:26:15 Post subject:

王俊楚 wrote:

喜欢《人民币》。

谢谢。

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Posted: 2007-08-02 23:52:03 Post subject:

人民币被捏了捏在人民手心一直战战兢兢很精彩 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-08-03 04:29:17 Post subject:

人民币真实的感受~欣赏

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Posted: 2007-08-03 15:19:44 Post subject:

提！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-08-05 05:13:46 Post subject:

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人民币被捏了捏
在人民手心
一直战战兢兢

很精彩

谢谢！

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