聽雲館主 秀才
  
  Joined: 03 Mar 2007 Posts: 361 Location: Canada 聽雲館主Collection | 
		
		
			
				 Posted: 2007-07-24 06:19:37    Post subject: 七律    次韻遣懐五首之一 | 
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				七律    次韻遣懐五首之一
 
 
百年踪迹托青蘋,此去桃源幾問津?
 
風雨多經天下事,悲欣交集劫餘身。
 
偶因失寐觀明月,每值聞歌憶故人。
 
鬧市雜居成大隱,順隨世道轉車輪。 _________________ 壇前易解拈花意     席上難逢顧曲心 | 
			 
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		白水 大学士
  
  Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection | 
		
		
			
				 Posted: 2007-07-24 14:07:32    Post subject:  | 
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				| 老师好诗连连, 拜读了 | 
			 
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		黄洋界 探花
  
  Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection | 
		
		
			
				 Posted: 2007-07-24 15:33:38    Post subject:  | 
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				拜读了,欣赏.身居闹市而不受熙熙攘攘的尘丗干扰,十分难得,如此之人,堪称
 
"大隐". | 
			 
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		游向高原的鱼 秀才
 
  Joined: 20 May 2007 Posts: 382
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				 Posted: 2007-07-24 16:05:05    Post subject:  | 
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				鬧市雜居成大隱,順隨世道轉車輪。
 
 
欣赏这两句。如今时代,一方面与时俱进,一方面又甘于寂寞,难能。 _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子,在其中认识自己。 | 
			 
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		暗香如沁 秀才
 
  Joined: 14 Jan 2007 Posts: 885 Location: 北京 暗香如沁Collection | 
		
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		聽雲館主 秀才
  
  Joined: 03 Mar 2007 Posts: 361 Location: Canada 聽雲館主Collection | 
		
		
			
				 Posted: 2007-08-08 19:28:17    Post subject:  | 
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				多謝樓上諸位詞長賜評! _________________ 壇前易解拈花意     席上難逢顧曲心 | 
			 
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