聽雲館主 秀才

Joined: 03 Mar 2007 Posts: 361 Location: Canada 聽雲館主Collection |
Posted: 2007-07-24 06:19:37 Post subject: 七律 次韻遣懐五首之一 |
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七律 次韻遣懐五首之一
百年踪迹托青蘋,此去桃源幾問津?
風雨多經天下事,悲欣交集劫餘身。
偶因失寐觀明月,每值聞歌憶故人。
鬧市雜居成大隱,順隨世道轉車輪。 _________________ 壇前易解拈花意 席上難逢顧曲心 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-07-24 14:07:32 Post subject: |
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| 老师好诗连连, 拜读了 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2007-07-24 15:33:38 Post subject: |
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拜读了,欣赏.身居闹市而不受熙熙攘攘的尘丗干扰,十分难得,如此之人,堪称
"大隐". |
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游向高原的鱼 秀才
Joined: 20 May 2007 Posts: 382
游向高原的鱼Collection |
Posted: 2007-07-24 16:05:05 Post subject: |
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鬧市雜居成大隱,順隨世道轉車輪。
欣赏这两句。如今时代,一方面与时俱进,一方面又甘于寂寞,难能。 _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子,在其中认识自己。 |
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暗香如沁 秀才
Joined: 14 Jan 2007 Posts: 885 Location: 北京 暗香如沁Collection |
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聽雲館主 秀才

Joined: 03 Mar 2007 Posts: 361 Location: Canada 聽雲館主Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-08 19:28:17 Post subject: |
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多謝樓上諸位詞長賜評! _________________ 壇前易解拈花意 席上難逢顧曲心 |
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