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白水
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Posted: 2007-07-12 06:40:18 Post subject: 指痕

指痕 __这是一枚深深埋藏的指痕那年, 那风那呜咽的风吹碎了深秋的葡萄从此, 失明的眼睛葬了暗红一路追寻曾经的迷惘, 坠落还有照亮冷夜的莹火一个孩子一个另类空间的孩子一枚渐渐淡去的指纹在那个冬日点燃御寒的衣用坦诚, 用炙热连同青春的逝灰烬的余烟袅袅, 卷起那首歌, 那首叛逆的歌那首用折断的白骨, 对是你宁愿折断也不愿弯曲的白骨鸣响第五维空间的回声疯人院的大墙隔断了两个世界夜深了我的心在问是你, 还是门外的人昏睡或是醒着

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Posted: 2007-07-12 07:43:19 Post subject:

拜读，欣赏！

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-07-12 17:11:47 Post subject:

用折断的白骨, 对是你宁愿折断也不愿弯曲的白骨鸣响第五维空间的回声 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2007-07-12 18:00:12 Post subject:

学习了！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2007-07-12 18:06:28 Post subject:

思考性很强的诗欣赏问好

白水
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Posted: 2007-07-12 19:18:30 Post subject:

lihan wrote:

拜读，欣赏！

问好新朋友．欢迎多交流

白水
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Posted: 2007-07-12 19:21:01 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

用折断的白骨, 对
是你
宁愿折断也不愿弯曲的白骨
鸣响第五维空间的
回声

冲浪，　你也太懒了，等你新作． Wink

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Posted: 2007-07-12 19:22:19 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

学习了！

问好老师．还请多批评．

白水
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Posted: 2007-07-12 19:24:08 Post subject:

木易沉香 wrote:

思考性很强的诗欣赏问好 Smile

问好沉香．多交流

阿依琼裙
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Posted: 2007-07-13 07:53:27 Post subject:

你在詞語和生活的韌性間寫詩~~贊! _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2007-07-14 01:13:44 Post subject:

提！提一个 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

湘妃123
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Posted: 2007-07-14 01:36:16 Post subject:

学习了哈

白水
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Posted: 2007-07-15 06:27:31 Post subject:

阿依琼裙 wrote:

你在詞語和生活的韌性間寫詩~~贊!

谢谢MM, 这首诗歌是两年前为一位我敬重的诗人写的.

白水
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Posted: 2007-07-15 06:29:12 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

提！提一个

谢谢金金, 是你让我又想起了这首诗歌 Embarassed

白水
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Posted: 2007-07-15 06:30:00 Post subject:

湘妃123 wrote:

学习了哈

问好新朋友, 多交流.等你的诗歌

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Posted: 2007-07-15 08:27:19 Post subject:

没怎么读懂,月光能说说写作的背景?

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Posted: 2007-07-15 17:50:44 Post subject:

到底是谁昏睡还是醒着，有时真的很难说清。

白水
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Posted: 2007-07-15 18:06:51 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

没怎么读懂,月光能说说写作的背景? Very Happy

http://zhidao.baidu.com/question/28194660.html

真正的诗人, 是忘我的. 我为他而感动, 是因为我作不到....... Embarassed

白水
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Posted: 2007-07-15 18:09:18 Post subject:

荷梦 wrote:

到底是谁昏睡还是醒着，有时真的很难说清。

是, 谢谢理解.

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Posted: 2007-07-15 23:50:40 Post subject:

在這個世界上,有人再次的想起是很深的幸福和感動. _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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