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  zhùcèshíjiān: 2007-01-09 tièzǐ: 1286
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				 fābiǎoyú: 2007-07-25 08:58:16    fābiǎozhùtí: Short Poems (21-30) | 
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another autumn 
 
hangs heavy with red apples 
 
cicada choir fades
 
 
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what joy this is 
 
fireworks bloom in the night sky 
 
beauty of ksana
 
 
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true value?
 
that’s like a hard nut to crack
 
one of those questions
 
 
24
 
the global warming
 
melted icebergs and cold war  
 
fall of Berlin wall 
 
 
25
 
the sounds of a soul
 
float under a glowing pen
 
birds stop twittering
 
 
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on empty fields
 
wanders an empty soul
 
to the emptiness
 
 
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leaving past behind
 
the spirit moves on
 
sunrise on horizon 
 
 
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to the mosquito
 
smiles a fat and grey spider
 
“welcome to my web!”
 
 
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it’s best to glance down
 
the mortal world rolling on
 
a fond dream shattered
 
 
30
 
a decent haiku?
 
5-7-5 not a must
 
an ah ha! moment
 
 
 
. _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins | 
			 
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		kokho 进士出身
  
  zhùcèshíjiān: 2006-11-30 tièzǐ: 2642 láizì: Singapore kokhoběiměifēngwénjí | 
		
		
			
				 fābiǎoyú: 2007-07-29 13:46:12    fābiǎozhùtí:  | 
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				what joy this is
 
fireworks bloom in the night sky
 
beauty of ksana
 
 
 
好 !!!
 
 
a decent haiku?
 
5-7-5 not a must
 
an ah ha! moment
 
 
高!!!
 
 
it’s best to glance down
 
the mortal world rolling on
 
a fond dream shattered 
 
 
还在品味  lake 提升了很多 ;))
 
 
another autumn
 
hangs heavy with red apples
 
cicada choir fades 
 
 
回眸才看到的精彩 !!!
 
 
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		Lake 举人
  
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				 fābiǎoyú: 2007-07-30 10:26:27    fābiǎozhùtí:  | 
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				谢谢Kokho点评。和你的精品相比,差远着去了。
 
 
“Ksana" 从你那偷学来的,总算找到机会运用一下。
 
 
an ah ha! moment 
 
leads to a ha ha! moment
 
what an enlightenment!
 
 
 
我这些写得很杂,没有分类,碰到什么就写什么,贻笑大方了。 _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins | 
			 
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		kokho 进士出身
  
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				 fābiǎoyú: 2007-07-30 21:55:51    fābiǎozhùtí:  | 
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				所有的好诗,都是这样的开始  !!!
 
 
据说100首有成,300首成家。。。
 
 
你可以经 有女儿了  :))
 
 
 
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		William Zhou周道模 探花
 
  zhùcèshíjiān: 2007-06-10 tièzǐ: 3950 láizì: 中国四川广汉 William Zhou周道模běiměifēngwénjí | 
		
		
			
				 fābiǎoyú: 2007-07-30 22:18:52    fābiǎozhùtí:  | 
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				very good! I've read them and learned something from them. I will read 
 
them later.Thank you, Lake! _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
 
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