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Short Poems (21-30)
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PostPosted: 2007-07-25 08:58:16    Post subject: Short Poems (21-30) Reply with quote

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another autumn
hangs heavy with red apples
cicada choir fades

22
what joy this is
fireworks bloom in the night sky
beauty of ksana

23
true value?
that’s like a hard nut to crack
one of those questions

24
the global warming
melted icebergs and cold war
fall of Berlin wall

25
the sounds of a soul
float under a glowing pen
birds stop twittering

26
on empty fields
wanders an empty soul
to the emptiness

27
leaving past behind
the spirit moves on
sunrise on horizon

28
to the mosquito
smiles a fat and grey spider
“welcome to my web!”

29
it’s best to glance down
the mortal world rolling on
a fond dream shattered

30
a decent haiku?
5-7-5 not a must
an ah ha! moment


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kokho
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PostPosted: 2007-07-29 13:46:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

what joy this is
fireworks bloom in the night sky
beauty of ksana
 
好 !!!

a decent haiku?
5-7-5 not a must
an ah ha! moment

高!!!

it’s best to glance down
the mortal world rolling on
a fond dream shattered

还在品味  lake 提升了很多 ;))

another autumn
hangs heavy with red apples
cicada choir fades

回眸才看到的精彩 !!!


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Lake
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PostPosted: 2007-07-30 10:26:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢Kokho点评。和你的精品相比,差远着去了。

“Ksana" 从你那偷学来的,总算找到机会运用一下。

an ah ha! moment
leads to a ha ha! moment
what an enlightenment!


我这些写得很杂,没有分类,碰到什么就写什么,贻笑大方了。
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PostPosted: 2007-07-30 21:55:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

所有的好诗,都是这样的开始 !!!

据说100首有成,300首成家。。。

你可以经 有女儿了 :))


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PostPosted: 2007-07-30 22:18:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

very good! I've read them and learned something from them. I will read
them later.Thank you, Lake!
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