Lake 举人

註册時間: 2007-01-09 帖子: 1286
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發錶於: 2007-07-25 08:58:16 發錶主題: Short Poems (21-30) |
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another autumn
hangs heavy with red apples
cicada choir fades
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what joy this is
fireworks bloom in the night sky
beauty of ksana
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true value?
that’s like a hard nut to crack
one of those questions
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the global warming
melted icebergs and cold war
fall of Berlin wall
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the sounds of a soul
float under a glowing pen
birds stop twittering
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on empty fields
wanders an empty soul
to the emptiness
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leaving past behind
the spirit moves on
sunrise on horizon
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to the mosquito
smiles a fat and grey spider
“welcome to my web!”
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it’s best to glance down
the mortal world rolling on
a fond dream shattered
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a decent haiku?
5-7-5 not a must
an ah ha! moment
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kokho 进士出身

註册時間: 2006-11-30 帖子: 2642 來自: Singapore kokho北美楓文集 |
發錶於: 2007-07-29 13:46:12 發錶主題: |
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what joy this is
fireworks bloom in the night sky
beauty of ksana
好 !!!
a decent haiku?
5-7-5 not a must
an ah ha! moment
高!!!
it’s best to glance down
the mortal world rolling on
a fond dream shattered
还在品味 lake 提升了很多 ;))
another autumn
hangs heavy with red apples
cicada choir fades
回眸才看到的精彩 !!!
。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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Lake 举人

註册時間: 2007-01-09 帖子: 1286
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發錶於: 2007-07-30 10:26:27 發錶主題: |
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谢谢Kokho点评。和你的精品相比,差远着去了。
“Ksana" 从你那偷学来的,总算找到机会运用一下。
an ah ha! moment
leads to a ha ha! moment
what an enlightenment!
我这些写得很杂,没有分类,碰到什么就写什么,贻笑大方了。 _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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kokho 进士出身

註册時間: 2006-11-30 帖子: 2642 來自: Singapore kokho北美楓文集 |
發錶於: 2007-07-30 21:55:51 發錶主題: |
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所有的好诗,都是这样的开始 !!!
据说100首有成,300首成家。。。
你可以经 有女儿了 :))
。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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William Zhou周道模 探花
註册時間: 2007-06-10 帖子: 3950 來自: 中国四川广汉 William Zhou周道模北美楓文集 |
發錶於: 2007-07-30 22:18:52 發錶主題: |
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very good! I've read them and learned something from them. I will read
them later.Thank you, Lake! _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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