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大家好,久违了! 旧诗新贴 <<剑客>>

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-06-26 00:34:23 Post subject: 大家好,久违了! 旧诗新贴 <<剑客>>

剑客它虚掩着你不必敲门可以直接进来先生，无疑我是你清晨的第一束鲜花请把我扶起来扶到窗口清新的风里让我飘起的长发蒙住你远眺的双眼请把你宽沿的礼帽给我在没人的时候我戴上，装成先生的模样摸下颏、沉思、打口哨先生，也请把香烟留下你不在的时候我就吸它缪斯是谁住哪条街穿什么衣服别拿她烦我，先生我只要你你就是我全部的回忆和憧憬我的枕前擦靴的旅人你风尘仆仆来自什么庄园或荒岛你种了很多植物，包括花是吧，先生千万别种哲学请将我拦腰擎起在风中向夕阳招摇鲜艳和芬芳我裙裾柔软的叶子顺你的手臂和肩头滑落再把我放下，先生你可以略约疯点我的枪手和剑客你来我就没有必要再穿上外衣你走我就把客房扔出门外它虚掩着，无疑我在等待新世纪降临的那天原你骑着白马带我从良 (1989.9.9) 大家好!最近因为下岗失业,另谋生路,所以太忙.很想念大家.问好! _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

桔子
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Posted: 2007-06-26 00:50:07 Post subject:

很优雅的风度.学习. 下岗了?真的吗少君兄.

白水
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Posted: 2007-06-26 04:40:55 Post subject:

蒙太奇的画面

黑雨滴
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Posted: 2007-06-26 06:37:31 Post subject:

问好诗人，保重 _________________ 个人主页：http://blog.sina.com.cn/afirewang

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-06-26 06:44:04 Post subject:

少君兄保重！天生我才必有用 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-06-26 08:26:43 Post subject:

女性的口吻写出梦幻的感觉~问好少君,下岗是在调侃吧,好好奋斗吧,做个生活的剑客~

温柔一刀
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Posted: 2007-06-26 17:12:45 Post subject:

天生我才必有用

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-06-28 19:15:36 Post subject:

谢各位关注！真的下岗了。我原在吉粮集团一子公司作销售员。因集团欲整体出卖，我们已放假（下岗）。不过，目前我又找到了一份工作。正在试用期。估计错不了。谢谢大家！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

白水
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Posted: 2007-06-28 19:32:48 Post subject:

哈, 请客

上城
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Posted: 2007-06-29 22:10:12 Post subject:

黑雨滴 wrote:

问好诗人，保重

庆贺庆贺.诗人终于下岗了.哈哈

赠诗人以宝剑.助少君写出与剑争辉的诗来.
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韩少君
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Posted: 2007-06-30 14:33:42 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

哈, 请客

谢谢白水先生!
我目前尚可.估计要比在原吉粮集团还要好.只是最近特忙,忙于表现和展示自己的能力,以求认可,争取稳定下来,长期打算.

我还是作市场开拓.静待佳音! cheers

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韩少君
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Posted: 2007-06-30 14:38:46 Post subject:

伤城 wrote:

黑雨滴 wrote:

问好诗人，保重

庆贺庆贺.诗人终于下岗了.哈哈

赠诗人以宝剑.助少君写出与剑争辉的诗来.

问候伤城小弟!下岗可不是好玩的.人到中年,从新择业,难着呢.

我同情并欲征服苦难,但不敢像赋闲诗人那样站在岸边玩味苦海.

哈哈!再见!
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欧阳学龙
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Posted: 2007-06-30 14:51:06 Post subject:

“或”字也是你用的？？？该学习了另外这里放屁的多大概因为你这个竹筒的缘故吧

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-07-03 14:51:45 Post subject:

愚兄不明贤弟之意,请明示. "或"我"惑"了. _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-07-03 15:18:22 Post subject:

“我是你清晨的第一束鲜花 ”，该句在人物间的主被动关系上有些颠倒。 “我就把客房扔出门外”，新奇大胆，但不合逻辑。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

野航
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Posted: 2007-07-04 17:03:21 Post subject:

少君高才，发迹是迟早的事。缪斯是谁住哪条街穿什么衣服别拿她烦我，先生 _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

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