冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
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Posted: 2007-07-01 09:26:41 Post subject: 驻<北美枫·古韵新音>有感 |
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驻<北美枫·古韵新音>有感
蒙懂开篇遇缪斯,借来神笔向清池。
秦砖汉瓦叠阿阜,辞赋骚声启梦思。
俊赏堪能师韵致,探幽也得作诗痴。
文缘款款浑如意,虽是流年沉醉时。 |
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hepingdao Site Admin

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
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Posted: 2007-07-01 09:40:25 Post subject: |
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文缘款款浑如意,
虽是留年也醉痴
很潇洒自如
问好冰清老师 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
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Posted: 2007-07-01 09:44:38 Post subject: |
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| hepingdao wrote: |
文缘款款浑如意,
虽是留年人也痴
很潇洒自如
问好冰清老师 |
岛主辛苦了,谢谢鼓励! |
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hepingdao Site Admin

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
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Posted: 2007-07-01 09:53:04 Post subject: |
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冰清老师,
在次你要是在多伦多,我就一定去看你啦
 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2007-07-01 16:47:09 Post subject: |
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冰清老师 信手写来, 古韵盎然,佩服,学习
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2007-07-01 18:59:20 Post subject: |
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韵幽诗雅。问冰清老师好!  |
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野航 秀才
Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 547 Location: toronto 野航Collection |
Posted: 2007-07-01 19:00:27 Post subject: |
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俊赏堪能师韵主,
探幽也得寸心知.
诗中三味一言中,问好冰清老师。 _________________ 回归自然 回归心灵 回归传统 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
Posted: 2007-07-02 18:19:42 Post subject: |
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谢谢岛主.黄洋界.莹雪.野航.白水!
拙作是实感,正如黄洋界师所赞: 卧水心容与, 抚松意流连, 楓坛聚俊彦, 岁岁拂管絃. 难得! |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
Posted: 2007-07-02 18:46:41 Post subject: |
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加拿大《游子吟》网络古典诗歌赛颁奖大会名师云集,盛况空前,没能参加,深深遗憾!
水水倩影,明星般的风采,我竟不敢相认.恕我老眼昏花呵  |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-07-02 20:23:12 Post subject: |
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| 冰清 wrote: |
加拿大《游子吟》网络古典诗歌赛颁奖大会名师云集,盛况空前,没能参加,深深遗憾!
水水倩影,明星般的风采,我竟不敢相认.恕我老眼昏花呵  |
服装是俗了些, 应付某些场合吧, 我也不习惯, 老师见笑了
主要请你看看那天朋友们为你们多么高兴. |
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