| 冰清 同进士出身
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2007-07-01 09:26:41    Post subject: 驻<北美枫·古韵新音>有感 |   |  
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				| 驻<北美枫·古韵新音>有感 
 蒙懂开篇遇缪斯,借来神笔向清池。
 秦砖汉瓦叠阿阜,辞赋骚声启梦思。
 俊赏堪能师韵致,探幽也得作诗痴。
 文缘款款浑如意,虽是流年沉醉时。
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		| hepingdao Site Admin
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-07-01 09:40:25    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 文缘款款浑如意, 虽是留年也醉痴
 
 很潇洒自如
 
 问好冰清老师
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		| 冰清 同进士出身
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2007-07-01 09:44:38    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | 文缘款款浑如意, 虽是留年人也痴
 
 很潇洒自如
 
 问好冰清老师
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 岛主辛苦了,谢谢鼓励!
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		| hepingdao Site Admin
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-07-01 09:53:04    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 冰清老师, 在次你要是在多伦多,我就一定去看你啦
 
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		| 黄洋界 探花
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-07-01 16:47:09    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 冰清老师 信手写来,           古韵盎然,佩服,学习 .
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		| 莹雪 进士出身
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2007-07-01 18:59:20    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 韵幽诗雅。问冰清老师好!  |  | 
	
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		| 野航 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2007-07-01 19:00:27    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 俊赏堪能师韵主, 探幽也得寸心知.
 
 诗中三味一言中,问好冰清老师。
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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		| 冰清 同进士出身
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2007-07-02 18:19:42    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 谢谢岛主.黄洋界.莹雪.野航.白水! 拙作是实感,正如黄洋界师所赞: 卧水心容与, 抚松意流连, 楓坛聚俊彦, 岁岁拂管絃.  难得!
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		| 冰清 同进士出身
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2007-07-02 18:46:41    Post subject: |   |  
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 加拿大《游子吟》网络古典诗歌赛颁奖大会名师云集,盛况空前,没能参加,深深遗憾!
 水水倩影,明星般的风采,我竟不敢相认.恕我老眼昏花呵
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-07-02 20:23:12    Post subject: |   |  
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 加拿大《游子吟》网络古典诗歌赛颁奖大会名师云集,盛况空前,没能参加,深深遗憾!
 水水倩影,明星般的风采,我竟不敢相认.恕我老眼昏花呵
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 服装是俗了些, 应付某些场合吧, 我也不习惯, 老师见笑了
   主要请你看看那天朋友们为你们多么高兴.
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