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夜来香

孙继廷
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Posted: 2007-04-24 04:58:00 Post subject: 夜来香

夜来香夜暮降临的时候就是生命的开始灿烂在午夜芬芳在午夜不为人前炫耀只求孤芳自赏整个春天的蕴育只为一夜的绽放我踏着夏月的清辉徘徊在芬芳的午夜露珠沾湿的衣裳沁满了芳香你因我欣赏而升华我因欣赏你而陶醉我于你在午夜中相依你也芬芳我也芬芳

了因大兄
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Posted: 2007-04-24 05:13:32 Post subject:

不错,只是手法老了些. _________________ 我不是树上的黑木耳，我被爱过不能随随便便不回家 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1236932795

赵福治
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Posted: 2007-04-25 01:46:30 Post subject:

视角可变换些.多来.

孙继廷
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Posted: 2007-04-26 04:07:54 Post subject:

二位诗人所言极是,只是一时难以改变,谢谢

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