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PostPosted: 2014-02-14 21:01:16    Post subject: 归*字谣 Reply with quote

归*字谣

思念,不嵌诗行
你说太俗
故人不入梦境,你说
太远。那么好吧,让我们相向而行
就像那日相向挥手

道别

是个有趣的词汇
凭空道出些许牵挂
牵断离情,挂失别绪
渐行渐远的影像渐渐潜入脑海
就像今天我们竭力搜索
渐渐淡化的朦胧


(二)Who are you?
你,是谁?如此这般
从温暖的雪窝探出
毛茸茸的小脑袋
傻呵呵的
向我?还是向迟迟不肯到来的早春
say
"Hi!"



(三)问谁?
归去来兮,结队的南雁
归去来兮,美丽的天鹅
我伫立于远离北回归线冰封的雪原
用冻得生痛的手指拍摄蓝天碧水
拍摄悠闲自在的水鸟
吟诵喃喃:春江水暖鸭先知
不由得哑然失笑
转身向你:“诗歌,真的被古人写尽了么?”



(四) 晓春

醒来了么?
慵懒的柳腰
醒来了么? 静谧的画舫
我匆匆踏着云路归来
梦中的水乡
你是否,已在悄然梳妆?



(五)甦

梳落枝头的鸟鸣
花也喃喃
玉兰儿虽未搭腔却分明憋紫了脸颊
隔街光秃秃的电杆上
几只越冬的鸦雀藏一脸坏笑
待蛰伏的蚯蚓
起舞腾龙

你席地而坐
用乜斜的眼神睥睨人寰 。捎带着
瞟一眼大千世界
突然发现林子大了什么样的鸟儿都会有
美与丑,烦恼与欢乐
无非心中一念

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PostPosted: 2014-02-15 02:00:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

自然优雅的离别诗
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PostPosted: 2014-02-15 10:36:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
自然优雅的离别诗

谢谢鼓励,问好元宵佳节
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PostPosted: 2014-02-15 20:01:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

有意境,有感觉的诗,祝马年快乐幸福。
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PostPosted: 2014-02-15 23:34:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

chenrunmin wrote:
有意境,有感觉的诗,祝马年快乐幸福。

谢谢鼓励,问好新年
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PostPosted: 2014-02-15 23:37:31    Post subject: Reply with quote


(二)Who are you?
你,是谁?如此这般
从温暖的雪窝探出
毛茸茸的小脑袋
傻呵呵的
向我?还是向迟迟不肯到来的早春
say
"Hi!"



(三)问谁?
归去来兮,结队的南雁
归去来兮,美丽的天鹅
我伫立于远离北回归线冰封的雪原
用冻得生痛的手指拍摄蓝天碧水
拍摄悠闲自在的水鸟
吟诵喃喃:春江水暖鸭先知
不由得我哑然失笑
转身向你:“诗歌,真的被古人写尽了么?”

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PostPosted: 2014-02-15 23:54:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

数月寒冬,昨日Toronto气温终于回升至零下二度,好生高兴,和先生同去观湖。南雁回归,水鸟翩翩,甚惊讶水鸟们大冷天还悠然戏水,先生笑道:“水鸟们还奇怪人们这么冷还立于冰雪?” Very Happy Very Happy
有谁知道第一张照片中是什么动物,它是从湖边的雪窝里钻出来的,我给它照相它一点也不怕,即不躲,也不钻回去,看着我傻呵呵的,特可爱 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2014-02-16 01:37:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

otter獭的可能性比较大
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PostPosted: 2014-02-16 04:51:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
otter獭的可能性比较大

谢谢peace。可是这个小家伙看起来比水獭小许多,可能是水獭贝贝 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2014-02-16 04:56:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
hepingdao wrote:
otter獭的可能性比较大

谢谢peace。可是这个小家伙看起来比水獭小许多,可能是水獭贝贝 Very Happy


水獭就是很小的,我看过一群,拖着长长的尾巴,像黑老鼠
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PostPosted: 2014-02-16 11:45:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢peace。可能是不同种类,我以前见过的水獭差不多50cm大呢。少见多怪了 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2014-02-17 02:14:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

好可爱的小东西,是什么动物,在雪堆里探出小脑袋。还有那些天鹅,那些野鸭,为什么它们不肯南飞,因为它们对这片湖水爱得深沉。

好美的景物,好美的诗,白水的诗总是给人美的享受。谢谢。 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2014-02-17 03:14:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰雪天鹅湖,戏水自悠闲
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PostPosted: 2014-02-17 03:21:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

黑眼睛的苏珊 wrote:
好可爱的小东西,是什么动物,在雪堆里探出小脑袋。还有那些天鹅,那些野鸭,为什么它们不肯南飞,因为它们对这片湖水爱得深沉。
好美的景物,好美的诗,白水的诗总是给人美的享受。谢谢。 Laughing
...


我也不知道,本想照旁边冰雪,它冒出来抢镜头,我就给它咔嚓了好几张 Very Happy
明天回国,回来后咱们大家再去野外观景好吗?你一句秋阳如蜜,就帮我酿一首诗歌.不回国想念国内亲友,回国又不舍北美的亲友,尽冒傻气 Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2014-02-17 03:50:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
冰雪天鹅湖,戏水自悠闲


建议你们抽空也去玩玩,冬日景之静谧,水之清凌,白天鹅与冰晶白雪相映成趣是其它季节看不到的 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2014-02-17 11:38:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

“牵挂”,你好神奇!你若有所待;我凝神了半晌!
喜欢白水这组美摄、美诗。——当我细细品味,我就像看到他们中间的那根红线,听到他们之间的心灵呼唤、心灵对话一样,非常感动!
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PostPosted: 2014-02-17 11:43:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
黑眼睛的苏珊 wrote:
好可爱的小东西,是什么动物,在雪堆里探出小脑袋。还有那些天鹅,那些野鸭,为什么它们不肯南飞,因为它们对这片湖水爱得深沉。
好美的景物,好美的诗,白水的诗总是给人美的享受。谢谢。 Laughing
...

我也不知道,本想照旁边冰雪,它冒出来抢镜头,我就给它咔嚓了好几张。
明天回国,回来后咱们大家再去野外观景好吗?你一句秋阳如蜜,就帮我酿一首诗歌.不回国想念国内亲友,回国又不舍北美的亲友,尽冒傻气
...

水,一路顺风! Laughing Laughing
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PostPosted: 2014-02-18 10:22:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

感觉较以往更加清丽。
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PostPosted: 2014-02-19 11:56:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好冰清老师,我刚回国。谢谢你的鼓励。
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PostPosted: 2014-02-19 11:56:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

长篙 wrote:
感觉较以往更加清丽。


谢谢鼓励,问好新春
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