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桃花妹妹，你在干啥

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2014-03-10 16:42:33 Post subject: 桃花妹妹，你在干啥

桃花妹妹，你在干啥周道模桃花妹妹，你干啥我怕进城打工的青春雾霾中找不到回家的路就在山坡上举起了火把妹妹桃花，在干啥我怕农家新楼院的燕子安乐窝中忘了飞舞唱歌就先吹起粉嘟嘟小喇叭桃花啊妹妹呀，在做啥春天刚出院脸上没血色想给她补补身子添件新衣我踮起脚舀阳光裁云霞•••••• 桃花啊妹妹们，你们在干啥我们怕匆忙的人生疏了大自然就用狂野的舞裙撩醒大地在春天的梦上描血色的画•••••• 2014-2-26 晨6：52 于连山 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

金金
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Posted: 2014-03-11 07:33:01 Post subject:

真实的应心应景！ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

William Zhou周道模
探花

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Posted: 2014-03-11 15:16:59 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

真实的应心应景！

谢谢金金的读评！在四川？
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水弦
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Posted: 2014-03-12 14:52:22 Post subject:

声请并茂形式严整 _________________ 诗意生存

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2014-03-15 01:33:47 Post subject:

水弦 wrote:

声请并茂形式严整

谢谢水弦来读评！

形式老套，内容不老套，民间口语，土味。
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钱晓强
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Posted: 2014-03-18 18:57:55 Post subject:

歌以蹈之。 _________________ 钱晓强的脑子http://blog.sina.com.cn/qxq2

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2014-03-20 03:52:32 Post subject:

钱晓强 wrote:

歌以蹈之。

谢谢读之评之！春天好！
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雅文
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Posted: 2014-03-20 16:46:40 Post subject:

“我们怕匆忙的人生疏了大自然就用狂野的舞裙撩醒大地在春天的梦上描血色的画•••••• ” 好，莫错春光。

William Zhou周道模
探花

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Posted: 2014-03-22 03:43:36 Post subject:

雅文 wrote:

“我们怕匆忙的人生疏了大自然
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谢谢雅文的读引感！

今天此诗参加桃花诗会的海选，被评为“梨花诗人”。奖品是：

港澳4天3晚游。感谢诗歌，享受诗歌！
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