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岁月的面具
孔飞37
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PostPosted: 2007-04-17 22:02:12    Post subject: 岁月的面具 Reply with quote

岁月

捧你的碗
膝下茧花开
望你的脸
泪流满面悲

走过许多坎坷
萤火的光鼓舞我
最坚韧的时刻
碎裂成江河

泥石流无法阻拦
广袤的大漠深处
保留着他们
奔涌向前的姿态

一股股洪流
一层层堆积
一条长大的峡谷
无论填埋或彻底翻浆

原始的风蚀
残存着远古的悲凉
我们的热量
无法穿越溪谷的时空

面具

撕下面具
剪开关联的黑洞
飘零的日历
淹没哭泣的日子

面膜美容
吸净毛孔的肮脏
改变不了苍老的容颜
光滑细腻的感觉越来越短暂

反复多次使用面膜
开始为了好看
后来成了习惯
你看不出表情的好坏

那些包裹的内伤
早已疮痍满目
那些痛痒的疤痕
提醒岁月的沧桑
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2007-04-17 23:01:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

原始的风蚀
残存着远古的悲凉
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孔飞37
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PostPosted: 2007-04-21 03:51:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢赵福治版主

文本进行修改,多提宝贵意见.
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PostPosted: 2007-04-21 04:45:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

反复多次使用面膜
开始为了好看
后来成了习惯
你看不出表情的好坏


问好.
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