qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-10-25 23:37:28 Post subject: 七律 回故乡 |
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七律 回故乡
羁旅天涯返故乡,川音依旧鬓飞霜。
倚窗翘首家亲盼,把酒言欢老友忙。
楼密车多迷旧路,馆喧人挤品鲜香。
星移斗转沧桑变,万里关山情永长。 |
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秋叶 秀才
Joined: 17 Feb 2007 Posts: 769
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Posted: 2013-10-26 04:26:11 Post subject: |
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qinghongh wrote: |
七律 回故乡
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庆宏兄, 大作甚妙,亲情,友情,世情,好总结啊。  |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-10-26 05:55:23 Post subject: |
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秋叶 wrote: |
qinghongh wrote: |
七律 回故乡
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庆宏兄, 大作甚妙,亲情,友情,世情,好总结啊。  |
谢谢秋叶兄雅赏。 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2013-10-26 08:10:35 Post subject: |
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到家了?读诗歌看来回国感受甚深。好奇地问一声,你这首诗歌是在机场发的?算时间以为你在途中。  |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-10-26 08:54:01 Post subject: |
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白水 Moonlight wrote: |
到家了?读诗歌看来回国感受甚深。好奇地问一声,你这首诗歌是在机场发的?算时间以为你在途中。  |
写在成都,发在多伦多,今晨回来的. |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2013-10-26 18:50:16 Post subject: |
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庆宏兄回国后感触颇深,想来有更好的佳作在后头。 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-10-26 19:30:18 Post subject: |
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笑聊 wrote: |
庆宏兄回国后感触颇深,想来有更好的佳作在后头。 |
谢谢笑聊兄雅赏! |
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晓松 举人

Joined: 26 Feb 2007 Posts: 1192
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Posted: 2013-10-27 02:30:02 Post subject: |
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天涯返乡,鬓已飞霜,斗转沧桑,关山情长。感慨颇多啊!一首抒发游子情怀的好诗。 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-10-27 03:33:41 Post subject: |
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晓松 wrote: |
天涯返乡,鬓已飞霜,斗转沧桑,关山情长。感慨颇多啊!一首抒发游子情怀的好诗。 |
谢谢晓松兄雅赏! |
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Daxia 秀才
Joined: 26 Apr 2013 Posts: 163 Location: Mississauga, Canada DaxiaCollection |
Posted: 2013-10-28 06:05:23 Post subject: |
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庆宏兄几年没回国啦?常回去看看,沧桑的变化就小了。  _________________ Daxia |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-10-28 06:59:38 Post subject: |
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Daxia wrote: |
庆宏兄几年没回国啦?常回去看看,沧桑的变化就小了。  |
今后应该回勤一些.谢谢晓鸣兄. |
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司马从戎 童生
Joined: 10 Jul 2013 Posts: 57
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Posted: 2013-10-31 09:45:39 Post subject: |
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拜读,问好。 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-11-01 02:07:58 Post subject: |
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谢谢司马兄赏读。祝安好! |
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一无 秀才

Joined: 20 Mar 2013 Posts: 576 Location: 中国 一无Collection |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-11-02 20:18:12 Post subject: |
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一无 wrote: |
"羁旅天涯返故乡,川音依旧鬓飞霜。 "
天府骄子,驰骋天涯。 |
谢谢诗友雅赏! |
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宁家珍 秀才

Joined: 20 May 2009 Posts: 470 Location: 中国黄山 宁家珍Collection |
Posted: 2013-11-06 09:41:42 Post subject: |
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欣赏好律,问候qinghongh老师,很久未见,想念。 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-11-06 11:19:18 Post subject: |
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宁家珍 wrote: |
欣赏好律,问候qinghongh老师,很久未见,想念。 |
谢谢家珍诗友,问好! |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
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Posted: 2013-11-07 04:05:24 Post subject: |
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川音依旧,羁旅情长!
赏学佳作。问候庆泓君! |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-11-07 06:26:46 Post subject: |
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冰清 wrote: |
川音依旧,羁旅情长!
赏学佳作。问候庆泓君! |
谢谢问好冰清老师! |
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