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七律回故乡

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Posted: 2013-10-25 23:37:28 Post subject: 七律回故乡

七律回故乡羁旅天涯返故乡，川音依旧鬓飞霜。倚窗翘首家亲盼，把酒言欢老友忙。楼密车多迷旧路，馆喧人挤品鲜香。星移斗转沧桑变，万里关山情永长。

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Posted: 2013-10-26 04:26:11 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

七律回故乡
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庆宏兄，大作甚妙，亲情，友情，世情，好总结啊。 Laughing

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Posted: 2013-10-26 05:55:23 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

七律回故乡
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庆宏兄，大作甚妙，亲情，友情，世情，好总结啊。 Laughing

谢谢秋叶兄雅赏。

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Posted: 2013-10-26 08:10:35 Post subject:

到家了？读诗歌看来回国感受甚深。好奇地问一声，你这首诗歌是在机场发的？算时间以为你在途中。

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Posted: 2013-10-26 08:54:01 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

到家了？读诗歌看来回国感受甚深。好奇地问一声，你这首诗歌是在机场发的？算时间以为你在途中。 Very Happy

写在成都,发在多伦多,今晨回来的.

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Posted: 2013-10-26 18:50:16 Post subject:

庆宏兄回国后感触颇深，想来有更好的佳作在后头。

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Posted: 2013-10-26 19:30:18 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

庆宏兄回国后感触颇深，想来有更好的佳作在后头。

谢谢笑聊兄雅赏！

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Posted: 2013-10-27 02:30:02 Post subject:

天涯返乡，鬓已飞霜，斗转沧桑，关山情长。感慨颇多啊！一首抒发游子情怀的好诗。

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Posted: 2013-10-27 03:33:41 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

天涯返乡，鬓已飞霜，斗转沧桑，关山情长。感慨颇多啊！一首抒发游子情怀的好诗。

谢谢晓松兄雅赏!

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Posted: 2013-10-28 06:05:23 Post subject:

庆宏兄几年没回国啦？常回去看看，沧桑的变化就小了。 _________________ Daxia

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Posted: 2013-10-28 06:59:38 Post subject:

Daxia wrote:

庆宏兄几年没回国啦？常回去看看，沧桑的变化就小了。 Smile

今后应该回勤一些.谢谢晓鸣兄.

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Posted: 2013-10-31 09:45:39 Post subject:

拜读，问好。

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Posted: 2013-11-01 02:07:58 Post subject:

司马从戎 wrote:

拜读，问好。

谢谢司马兄赏读。祝安好！

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Posted: 2013-11-02 09:48:33 Post subject:

"羁旅天涯返故乡，川音依旧鬓飞霜。 " 天府骄子，驰骋天涯。 _________________ 名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。 ———清张问陶 http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-11-02 20:18:12 Post subject:

一无 wrote:

"羁旅天涯返故乡，川音依旧鬓飞霜。 "

天府骄子，驰骋天涯。

谢谢诗友雅赏！

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Posted: 2013-11-06 09:41:42 Post subject:

欣赏好律，问候qinghongh老师，很久未见，想念。

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Posted: 2013-11-06 11:19:18 Post subject:

宁家珍 wrote:

欣赏好律，问候qinghongh老师，很久未见，想念。

谢谢家珍诗友，问好！

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Posted: 2013-11-07 04:05:24 Post subject:

川音依旧，羁旅情长！赏学佳作。问候庆泓君！

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Posted: 2013-11-07 06:26:46 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

川音依旧，羁旅情长！
赏学佳作。问候庆泓君！

谢谢问好冰清老师！

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