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 发表于: 2013-07-12 03:27:24 发表主题: Home delivery |
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Home delivery
me go to a place--
to pick up a new instrument
which will create its own symphony
all the wonderful music starts
when the trumpet opens its overture
a cry out loud--let
sign and date; let’s go home, baby
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William Zhou周道模
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| 发表于: 2013-11-26 20:12:29 发表主题: |
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read it.thanks!
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| 发表于: 2013-11-27 00:27:42 发表主题: |
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When reading the title I was thinking something was delivered to your home.
Now that after reading the poem, it seems like a successful buy of an instrument.
"let sign and date", does that mean you sign and date the purchase?
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| 发表于: 2013-11-27 02:00:12 发表主题: |
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是有些字面外別的意義。
baby 可以是嬰兒，delivery 也可以是生產。
trumpet 是發生的彎道（喻女人的產道）。
生產是要喊叫的，嬰兒的第一聲也是。 
人其實也是個instrument, 英文上有這樣的用法的。
父母要簽名的。
let me go to a place
sing and date
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| 发表于: 2013-11-27 02:40:18 发表主题: |
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Totally missed the metaphor! Just felt "cry out loud" a kind of strange describing an instrument if not used as personification. haha...
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| 发表于: 2013-11-27 02:48:49 发表主题: |
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a cry "out!"
loud
out 可能 多義 
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