博弈 榜眼
Joined: 21 Dec 2006 Posts: 4381 Location: SFO 博弈Collection |
Posted: 2013-07-12 03:27:24 Post subject: Home delivery |
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Home delivery
me go to a place--
to pick up a new instrument
which will create its own symphony
all the wonderful music starts
when the trumpet opens its overture
a cry out loud--let
sign and date; let’s go home, baby _________________ (在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美) |
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William Zhou周道模 探花
Joined: 10 Jun 2007 Posts: 3950 Location: 中国四川广汉 William Zhou周道模Collection |
Posted: 2013-11-26 20:12:29 Post subject: |
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read it.thanks! _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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Lake 举人

Joined: 09 Jan 2007 Posts: 1286
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Posted: 2013-11-27 00:27:42 Post subject: |
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When reading the title I was thinking something was delivered to your home.
Now that after reading the poem, it seems like a successful buy of an instrument.
"let sign and date", does that mean you sign and date the purchase? _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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博弈 榜眼
Joined: 21 Dec 2006 Posts: 4381 Location: SFO 博弈Collection |
Posted: 2013-11-27 02:00:12 Post subject: |
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是有些字面外別的意義。
baby 可以是嬰兒,delivery 也可以是生產。
trumpet 是發生的彎道(喻女人的產道)。
生產是要喊叫的,嬰兒的第一聲也是。
人其實也是個instrument, 英文上有這樣的用法的。
父母要簽名的。
let me go to a place
sing and date _________________ (在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美) |
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Lake 举人

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Posted: 2013-11-27 02:40:18 Post subject: |
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Totally missed the metaphor! Just felt "cry out loud" a kind of strange describing an instrument if not used as personification. haha... _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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博弈 榜眼
Joined: 21 Dec 2006 Posts: 4381 Location: SFO 博弈Collection |
Posted: 2013-11-27 02:48:49 Post subject: |
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a cry "out!"
loud
out 可能 多義  _________________ (在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美) |
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