Lotus Village

[白水]

荷乡

芙蓉鼎盛时
夏便疯了
晨朝晖，暮也朝晖
热浪燥浮着满池漂絮
你不得不退避三舍，静候
秋凉时，摘一捧清香的莲子
待冬夜品羹观雪
乐得恬逸

Lotus Village

When lotuses are in full bloom
the summer turns mad
the morning starts with a scorcher, as well as the evening
heat wave floats petals in a pool
you had to step back to your place
until the autumn comes
to pick up some fragrant lotus seeds
on a winter night, we will sip the soup and watch snow flakes
how much more leisure and comfort a life can get.

[William Zhou周道模]

through the life of lotus?
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周道模

[白水]

Hi，William
It is depending on the reader, everyone can get their own images
here are other
http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=38582

Have a nice weekend

[hepingdao]

When lotuses in full bloom,
the summer turns mad.
The morning starts with a scorcher. So does the evening
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[白水]

thanks, peace
I like the phrase: " the summer turns mad.", and changed it。

[Lake]

同意 hepingdao 的句型 " so does the evening".

标点符号和大小写显得有些随意了.
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the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

[SLIU]

待冬夜品羹观雪
乐得恬逸

好惬意。。

[白水]

[白水]

[SLIU]

[qinghongh]

[SLIU]