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荷乡
芙蓉鼎盛时
夏便疯了
晨朝晖，暮也朝晖
热浪燥浮着满池漂絮
你不得不退避三舍，静候
秋凉时，摘一捧清香的莲子
待冬夜品羹观雪
乐得恬逸
Lotus Village
When lotuses are in full bloom
the summer turns mad
the morning starts with a scorcher, as well as the evening
heat wave floats petals in a pool
you had to step back to your place
until the autumn comes
to pick up some fragrant lotus seeds
on a winter night, we will sip the soup and watch snow flakes
how much more leisure and comfort a life can get. |
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William Zhou周道模
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through the life of lotus?
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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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白水
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hepingdao
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When lotuses in full bloom,
the summer turns mad.
The morning starts with a scorcher. So does the evening
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白水
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thanks, peace
I like the phrase: " the summer turns mad.", and changed it。 |
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Lake
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同意 hepingdao 的句型 " so does the evening".
标点符号和大小写显得有些随意了.
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待冬夜品羹观雪
乐得恬逸
好惬意。。 |
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白水
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同意 hepingdao 的句型 " so does the evening".
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鸟宿池边树，僧敲月下门。每个人对诗歌的感觉不同吧，推敲了几日，还是忍痛舍弃了“推”。
Anyway，thank you for your suggestion
have a nice weekend |
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待冬夜品羹观雪
乐得恬逸
好惬意。。 |
Thanks 466. I remember that you love it  |
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SLIU
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待冬夜品羹观雪
乐得恬逸
好惬意。。 |
Thanks 466. I remember that you love it |
you know what, 6 is my lucky number |
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待冬夜品羹观雪
乐得恬逸
好惬意。。 |
Thanks 466. I remember that you love it |
you know what, 6 is my lucky number |
66 smooth! |
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待冬夜品羹观雪
乐得恬逸
好惬意。。 |
Thanks 466. I remember that you love it |
you know what, 6 is my lucky number |
66 smooth! |
Thanks qinghong! Wish you the best of luck. |
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