William Zhou周道模
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这水比你的心还苦
它死命地
托你 去 生
Dead Sea
by William Zhou
Its water is more bitter than your heart
But it lifts you
to live desperately
2012-9-7 by Dead Sea
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But it lifts you
问好
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William Zhou周道模
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But it lifts you
问好 |
谢谢指正。低级错误啊。
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But it lifts you
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or lifts you to life?
don't like where "desperately" ends.
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But it lifts you
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or lifts you to life?
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Thank you for your words! Good luck to you!
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