William Zhou周道模 探花
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这水比你的心还苦
它死命地
托你 去 生
Dead Sea
by William Zhou
Its water is more bitter than your heart
But it lifts you
to live desperately
2012-9-7 by Dead Sea _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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But it lifts you
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William Zhou周道模 探花
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But it lifts you
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谢谢指正。低级错误啊。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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But it lifts you
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or lifts you to life?
don't like where "desperately" ends. _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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But it lifts you
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Thank you for your words! Good luck to you! _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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