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【怀抱泥土】

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Posted: 2013-01-30 09:13:13 Post subject: 【怀抱泥土】

【怀抱泥土】 (一) 无穷的黑无穷的夜期待重逢我期待重逢一枚汗水的温度一粒种子的风度 (二) 膨胀与渴望一切光线的夜膨胀与吞噬一切颜色的夜我怀抱泥土试图说服美丽眼睛离开美丽的住处 (三) 夜夜腹空空夜腹空空，富足而空茫我怀抱泥土还在安慰疲惫生命别哭 (四) 爱太阳也爱月亮忧伤而又忧伤在灯光小屋我微笑内心我不保证寂静中心与深处的寂静存在孤独 (五) 别哭！回到最初的赤裸与坦怀别哭！由此谱成一切音符别哭！别哭！ (六) 那一刻不停的风在粮食与花开之处准备再次生育 2013.1.30 _________________ __________________________ 诗书短文章，潦草乃为狂。管他载道否，吾趣吾自张。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/huolu9

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Posted: 2013-01-30 21:36:26 Post subject:

生生不息

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Posted: 2013-02-10 16:09:35 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

生生不息

白水君新春快乐！总觉得这一段前几节衔接有点问题，请给提点意见！
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Posted: 2013-02-11 11:33:44 Post subject:

问好远狼。我觉得文字就像小马驹，每个人都有不同的驾驭方式不管黑马白马，能跑千里就是好马。

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Posted: 2013-02-16 15:15:06 Post subject: 白水君的话总像是我给自己理由。多谢！

白水 Moonlight wrote:

问好远狼。我觉得文字就像小马驹，每个人都有不同的驾驭方式
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Posted: 2013-02-16 16:30:01 Post subject:

读现代派的诗比较多，语言也受影响了。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2013-02-16 22:01:47 Post subject:

把风抱在怀里，情系泥土！ _________________ 墙漏风了

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Posted: 2013-02-27 17:03:18 Post subject:

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

读现代派的诗比较多，语言也受影响了。

我对诗歌流派倒不是很在意。
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Posted: 2013-02-27 17:06:39 Post subject:

风墙 wrote:

把风抱在怀里，情系泥土！

根在故乡
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