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秋深
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PostPosted: 2012-11-01 22:14:57    Post subject: 秋深 Reply with quote

秋深
文/ 山城子

走在秋深的路上
包谷早都献出了它们的子女
容颜衰老
执着地守着土地

遗落路边的葵花籽儿
生出了鲜嫩
没能避免错误
命里注定走不进花季了

人生一世
草木一秋
一茬茬稻谷如一茬茬人
谁来收藏生命的爱恨

小学校的铃声不见了
代之以“老师辛苦”的录音
确实不轻松
课上课下百般地文明蹂躏

2012-11-2于夏云镇
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PostPosted: 2012-11-02 03:38:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

时序变迁, 沧海桑田, 人颜易老, 此心不改
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PostPosted: 2012-11-02 10:01:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

课上课下百般地文明蹂躏 Question

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PostPosted: 2012-11-02 16:39:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
时序变迁, 沧海桑田, 人颜易老, 此心不改


问好岛主!!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-02 16:41:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
课上课下百般地文明蹂躏 Question

有点不明白 Embarassed


问好白水!
——应试教育是对儿童天性的摧残!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-08 14:56:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

末句我不发言。这首让人心向往,“内蕴格律”的追求,是人生的劲放境界。
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PostPosted: 2012-11-10 07:17:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

山城子 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
课上课下百般地文明蹂躏 Question

有点不明白 Embarassed


问好白水!
应试教育是对儿童天性的摧残!
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应试教育是对儿童天性的摧残
太同意老师的观点了。问好周末
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PostPosted: 2012-11-10 18:22:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very Happy ,问好。
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PostPosted: 2012-11-10 19:19:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好前辈!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-11 21:51:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

金金 wrote:
末句我不发言。这首让人心向往,“内蕴格律”的追求,是人生的劲放境界。


问好金金!谢谢你的鼓励!!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-11 21:52:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
山城子 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
课上课下百般地文明蹂躏 Question

有点不明白 Embarassed


问好白水!
应试教育是对儿童天性的摧残!
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应试教育是对儿童天性的摧残
...


现在是从幼儿园就开始摧残了!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-11 21:52:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Very Happy ,问好。


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PostPosted: 2012-11-11 21:54:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

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问好前辈!

遥握冷雨!!
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