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Posted: 2012-11-01 22:14:57 Post subject: 秋深

秋深文/ 山城子走在秋深的路上包谷早都献出了它们的子女容颜衰老执着地守着土地遗落路边的葵花籽儿生出了鲜嫩没能避免错误命里注定走不进花季了人生一世草木一秋一茬茬稻谷如一茬茬人谁来收藏生命的爱恨小学校的铃声不见了代之以“老师辛苦”的录音确实不轻松课上课下百般地文明蹂躏 2012-11-2于夏云镇 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2012-11-02 03:38:19 Post subject:

时序变迁, 沧海桑田, 人颜易老, 此心不改 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2012-11-02 10:01:20 Post subject:

课上课下百般地文明蹂躏有点不明白

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Posted: 2012-11-02 16:39:49 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

时序变迁, 沧海桑田, 人颜易老, 此心不改

问好岛主！！
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山城子
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Posted: 2012-11-02 16:41:07 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

课上课下百般地文明蹂躏 Question

有点不明白

问好白水！
——应试教育是对儿童天性的摧残！
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Posted: 2012-11-08 14:56:22 Post subject:

末句我不发言。这首让人心向往，“内蕴格律”的追求，是人生的劲放境界。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2012-11-10 07:17:34 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

课上课下百般地文明蹂躏 Question

有点不明白

问好白水！
应试教育是对儿童天性的摧残！
...

应试教育是对儿童天性的摧残
太同意老师的观点了。问好周末

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2012-11-10 18:22:51 Post subject:

，问好。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2012-11-10 19:19:50 Post subject:

问好前辈！

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Posted: 2012-11-11 21:51:07 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

末句我不发言。这首让人心向往，“内蕴格律”的追求，是人生的劲放境界。

问好金金！谢谢你的鼓励！！
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Posted: 2012-11-11 21:52:16 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

山城子 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

课上课下百般地文明蹂躏 Question

有点不明白

问好白水！
应试教育是对儿童天性的摧残！
...

应试教育是对儿童天性的摧残
...

现在是从幼儿园就开始摧残了！
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Posted: 2012-11-11 21:52:59 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

，问好。

冬安！！
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Posted: 2012-11-11 21:54:04 Post subject:

冷雨 wrote:

问好前辈！

遥握冷雨！！
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