胡恢宗 秀才

Joined: 15 Mar 2008 Posts: 564
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Posted: 2011-07-09 05:58:13 Post subject: 贺圣朝 · 昆宗百日祭(旧作) |
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算来百日匆如许,痛阴阳分处。奈何难入梦三更,忆音容相顾。
山重水复,离情难诉,更霜风凄雨。当年困境酿艰辛,问根源谁铸。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2011-07-09 16:33:57 Post subject: |
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当年困境酿艰辛,问根源谁铸。
结尾词尽意不尽。问好兄台。 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2011-07-09 17:44:27 Post subject: |
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余音绕梁 |
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胡恢宗 秀才

Joined: 15 Mar 2008 Posts: 564
胡恢宗Collection |
Posted: 2011-07-10 06:50:51 Post subject: |
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谢聊笑老师阅评。问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞 |
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胡恢宗 秀才

Joined: 15 Mar 2008 Posts: 564
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Posted: 2011-07-10 06:53:07 Post subject: |
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谢白水老师阅评。问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2011-07-10 10:54:16 Post subject: |
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山重水复,离情难诉
深情厚意在其间。 |
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