胡恢宗 秀才
  
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				 Posted: 2011-07-09 05:58:13    Post subject: 贺圣朝 · 昆宗百日祭(旧作) | 
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				算来百日匆如许,痛阴阳分处。奈何难入梦三更,忆音容相顾。
 
山重水复,离情难诉,更霜风凄雨。当年困境酿艰辛,问根源谁铸。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞 | 
			 
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		笑聊 探花
 
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				 Posted: 2011-07-09 16:33:57    Post subject:  | 
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				当年困境酿艰辛,问根源谁铸。
 
 
结尾词尽意不尽。问好兄台。 | 
			 
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		白水 大学士
  
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				 Posted: 2011-07-09 17:44:27    Post subject:  | 
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				| 余音绕梁 | 
			 
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		胡恢宗 秀才
  
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				 Posted: 2011-07-10 06:50:51    Post subject:  | 
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				谢聊笑老师阅评。问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞 | 
			 
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		胡恢宗 秀才
  
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				 Posted: 2011-07-10 06:53:07    Post subject:  | 
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				谢白水老师阅评。问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞 | 
			 
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		qinghongh 榜眼
 
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				 Posted: 2011-07-10 10:54:16    Post subject:  | 
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				山重水复,离情难诉
 
 
深情厚意在其间。 | 
			 
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