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 發錶於: 2011-02-11 07:54:23 發錶主題: The top has come down |
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the top on
the top of people
has come down, the con-
front has won
from the below
by mostly 30-
year-olds
(listening to the news in Egypt)
35% of people in Egypt are under 30 years old.
The president has ruled the country for 30 years.
Talk about the generations.
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（在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美） |
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William Zhou周道模
探花
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William Zhou周道模北美楓文集 |
| 發錶於: 2011-02-19 03:16:14 發錶主題: |
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long live the people!
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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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nightingale2
童生
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| 發錶於: 2011-02-19 03:24:47 發錶主題: |
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long live the people!
and i wait and see how good those people are, if they are good, it would be our turn very soon, just look at the whole situation in the middle-east, i just hope that some fxxx stupit leaders could realize that you can't stop a river flowing or flooding and begin to teach peopple about the morden spirit, otherwise there would be lots of blood and dead bodies! |
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Lake
举人
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Lake北美楓文集 |
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Timely piece. 第三行为什么要把一个词分开断句，是为了把front挪到下一行的前面（front)，而且又起到押韵的效果？
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博弈北美楓文集 |
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| Timely piece. 第三行为什么要把一个词分开断句，是为了把front挪到下一行的前面（front)，而且又起到押韵的效果？ |
the top on
the top of people
has come down, the con-
front has won
from the below
by mostly 30-
year-olds
頭尾韻, 眼睛的, 聲則相近的.
Confront, to meet in opposition;
opposition, placement opposite to another;
so there you go, deconstructed and placed in
two lines, one at the end, the other at the beginning;)
but the front has won.
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