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Lake
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发表于: 2011-02-19 20:19:06 发表主题: Looking out the Window

Looking out the Window Looking out the window in January, the morning sky misty with drizzling snow, yet you can feel the excitement of threads of light pushing through, like stage lighting, illuminating, focusing, lacing the entire firmament with all colors of life. _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

连南河
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William Zhou周道模
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发表于: 2011-02-20 18:55:30 发表主题:

snow is melting birds are singing souls are waking lake is writing _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

Lake
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发表于: 2011-02-20 21:03:37 发表主题:

William Zhou周道模写到:

snow is melting

birds are singing

souls are waking

lake is writing

Thanks, William.

Lake is babbling... Smile

_________________
the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

Rhapsodia
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发表于: 2011-02-25 09:16:19 发表主题:

“Lake is babbling" better than "Lake is battling" anyway. The smell of spring isn't far from behind the snow of January though.