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五律咏白兔

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-01-02 13:24:59 Post subject: 五律咏白兔

五律咏白兔三窟成逸事智力竟超群扑朔尊豪士迷离爱翠裙霜毛亲碧草赤眼望微云捣药怀乡井温情净俗氛 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

胡恢宗
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Posted: 2011-01-02 16:49:05 Post subject:

用典无痕迹，挥毫贺兔年。向老师学习。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-01-02 20:35:05 Post subject:

温和祥瑞！！！问好黄老师！

影沉寒水
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Posted: 2011-01-03 02:43:39 Post subject:

月照在乡 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-01-03 08:00:47 Post subject:

谢朋友评阅，向大家问好！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

白云闲人
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Posted: 2011-01-03 12:09:30 Post subject:

形象生动，活灵活現！祝兔年吉祥！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-01-03 13:20:14 Post subject:

謝白云兄阅賞，祝兔年顺遂！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

qinghongh
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Posted: 2011-01-03 16:02:26 Post subject:

黄老师兔年快乐！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-01-04 06:27:51 Post subject:

庆宏新年好！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

秋叶
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Posted: 2011-01-06 15:59:34 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

五律咏白兔
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霜毛亲碧草赤眼望微云

黄老师，新年好！该联写绝了，学习了。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-01-07 06:45:34 Post subject:

謝秋叶赏阅，问新年好！最近一次在白水家，我送给大家的贺卡中的那首五绝，其中一句你指出平仄有误，謝謝！我已改动，在稍后时间，你将在我上传图片中见到。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

王君明
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Posted: 2011-01-09 07:28:05 Post subject:

黄先生用典自然，若即若离更见功力，学习，问好。 _________________ 虚拟网络　真实生活

连南河
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Posted: 2011-01-09 07:33:37 Post subject:

兔年吉祥! _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-01-09 08:51:15 Post subject:

謝君明兄评阅，謝连南河祝福，祝二位新年好！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

冰清
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Posted: 2011-01-10 20:28:52 Post subject:

呵呵，有智有谋，有情有义。黄兄，这兔真被你写活了。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-01-13 06:05:39 Post subject:

謝冰清评阅鼓励，问好！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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