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五律 咏白兔
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PostPosted: 2011-01-02 13:24:59    Post subject: 五律 咏白兔 Reply with quote

五律 咏白兔

三窟成逸事 智力竟超群
扑朔尊豪士 迷离爱翠裙
霜毛亲碧草 赤眼望微云
捣药怀乡井 温情净俗氛
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PostPosted: 2011-01-02 16:49:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

用典无痕迹,挥毫贺兔年。向老师学习。
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PostPosted: 2011-01-02 20:35:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

温和祥瑞!!!

问好黄老师!
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PostPosted: 2011-01-03 02:43:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

月照在乡
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PostPosted: 2011-01-03 08:00:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢朋友评阅,向大家问好!
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PostPosted: 2011-01-03 12:09:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

形象生动,活灵活現!
祝兔年吉祥!
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PostPosted: 2011-01-03 13:20:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝白云兄阅賞,祝兔年顺遂!
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PostPosted: 2011-01-03 16:02:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄老师兔年快乐!
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PostPosted: 2011-01-04 06:27:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

庆宏新年好!
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PostPosted: 2011-01-06 15:59:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
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霜毛亲碧草 赤眼望微云

黄老师,新年好! 该联写绝了,学习了。
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PostPosted: 2011-01-07 06:45:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝秋叶赏阅,问新年好!最近一次在白水家,我送给大家的
贺卡中的那首五绝,其中一句你指出平仄有误,謝謝!我已
改动,在稍后时间,你将在我上传图片中见到。
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PostPosted: 2011-01-09 07:28:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄先生用典自然,若即若离更见功力,学习,问好。
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PostPosted: 2011-01-09 07:33:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

兔年吉祥!
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PostPosted: 2011-01-09 08:51:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝君明兄评阅,謝连南河祝福,祝二位新年好!
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PostPosted: 2011-01-10 20:28:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵,有智有谋,有情有义。黄兄,这兔真被你写活了。
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PostPosted: 2011-01-13 06:05:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝冰清评阅鼓励,问好!
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