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【五律】咏海鸥（有图）

黄洋界
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Posted: 2010-12-19 08:26:07 Post subject: 【五律】咏海鸥（有图）

五律咏海鸥万顷烟波里忘机逐浪游知风扬健翮掠水浴清流伴钓舒闲趣追船豁远眸云心凌浩荡雪羽舞芳洲 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

白水
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Posted: 2010-12-19 08:30:15 Post subject:

开阔的胸襟，翱翔的文字

qinghongh
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Posted: 2010-12-19 11:03:41 Post subject:

知风扬健翮掠水浴清流黄老师好联！

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-12-19 15:15:07 Post subject:

黄兄扬健翩，凌云舒远眸！豁达、灑脱！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

黄洋界
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Posted: 2010-12-19 17:59:28 Post subject:

謝白水，庆宏，白云兄阅评。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

影沉寒水
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Posted: 2010-12-20 02:09:15 Post subject:

自由自在的 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-12-20 02:37:25 Post subject:

万顷烟波里忘机逐浪游知风扬健翮掠水浴清流伴钓舒闲趣追船豁远眸云心凌浩荡雪羽舞芳洲名为咏鸥实为赋志也！学习欣赏并问好老师！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2010-12-20 08:31:00 Post subject:

謝寒水兄，笑聊兄賞阅。问好！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

宁家珍
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Posted: 2010-12-21 04:53:48 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

开阔的胸襟，翱翔的文字

欣赏，好诗，赞成白水老师的评点。问候诗友。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2010-12-21 12:05:27 Post subject:

謝宁家珍评阅。问好！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

冰清
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Posted: 2010-12-22 12:29:25 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

万顷烟波里忘机逐浪游
知风扬健翮掠水浴清流
伴钓舒闲趣追船豁远眸
云心凌浩荡雪羽舞芳洲

名为咏鸥实为赋志也！学习欣赏并问好老师！
...

呵呵，笑聊高见。
忘机一陶然！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2010-12-22 13:21:47 Post subject:

謝冰请賞阅，祝圣诞节愉快！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

胡恢宗
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Posted: 2010-12-22 19:14:17 Post subject:

万倾烟波里，忘机逐浪游。云心凌浩荡，雪羽舞芳洲。----景美情真。向黄洋界老师问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

黄洋界
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Posted: 2010-12-22 20:02:57 Post subject:

谢謝评阅，望多交流。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

连南河
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Posted: 2010-12-23 20:40:39 Post subject:

笑聊写到: 名为咏鸥实为赋志也！ "云心凌浩荡雪羽舞芳洲 " _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

孟冲之
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Posted: 2010-12-24 13:11:23 Post subject:

黄老师圣诞快乐! 诗越老越洒脱了 _________________ 不以心捐道,不以人胜天

黄洋界
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Posted: 2010-12-25 08:23:14 Post subject:

谢连南河，孟冲之赏评，祝圣诞快乐！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

王君明
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Posted: 2010-12-27 07:32:36 Post subject:

问好黄先生，久违了：）大作意味醇厚，深得五律体气，来学习。 _________________ 虚拟网络　真实生活

黄洋界
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Posted: 2010-12-27 08:33:56 Post subject:

王兄，謝谢你的鼓励，好久不见，十分想念，并望拜读大作。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-04-11 12:58:23 Post subject:

附书法局部。装裱以后再拍全局。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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