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【五律】 咏海鸥 (有图)
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PostPosted: 2010-12-19 08:26:07    Post subject: 【五律】 咏海鸥 (有图) Reply with quote

五律 咏海鸥

万顷烟波里 忘机逐浪游
知风扬健翮 掠水浴清流
伴钓舒闲趣 追船豁远眸
云心凌浩荡 雪羽舞芳洲


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PostPosted: 2010-12-19 08:30:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

开阔的胸襟,翱翔的文字
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PostPosted: 2010-12-19 11:03:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

知风扬健翮 掠水浴清流

黄老师好联!
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PostPosted: 2010-12-19 15:15:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄兄扬健翩,凌云舒远眸!
豁达、灑脱!
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PostPosted: 2010-12-19 17:59:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝白水,庆宏,白云兄阅评。
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PostPosted: 2010-12-20 02:09:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

自由自在的
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PostPosted: 2010-12-20 02:37:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

万顷烟波里 忘机逐浪游
知风扬健翮 掠水浴清流
伴钓舒闲趣 追船豁远眸
云心凌浩荡 雪羽舞芳洲

名为咏鸥实为赋志也!学习欣赏并问好老师!
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PostPosted: 2010-12-20 08:31:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝寒水兄,笑聊兄賞阅。问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-12-21 04:53:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
开阔的胸襟,翱翔的文字
欣赏,好诗,赞成白水老师的评点。问候诗友。
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PostPosted: 2010-12-21 12:05:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝宁家珍评阅。问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-12-22 12:29:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊 wrote:
万顷烟波里 忘机逐浪游
知风扬健翮 掠水浴清流
伴钓舒闲趣 追船豁远眸
云心凌浩荡 雪羽舞芳洲

名为咏鸥实为赋志也!学习欣赏并问好老师!
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呵呵,笑聊高见。
忘机一陶然!
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PostPosted: 2010-12-22 13:21:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝冰请賞阅,祝圣诞节愉快!
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PostPosted: 2010-12-22 19:14:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

万倾烟波里,忘机逐浪游。云心凌浩荡,雪羽舞芳洲。----景美情真。向黄洋界老师问好。
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PostPosted: 2010-12-22 20:02:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢謝评阅,望多交流。
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PostPosted: 2010-12-23 20:40:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊写到:

名为咏鸥实为赋志也!

"云心凌浩荡 雪羽舞芳洲 " Laughing
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PostPosted: 2010-12-24 13:11:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄老师圣诞快乐!
诗越老越洒脱了
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PostPosted: 2010-12-25 08:23:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢连南河,孟冲之赏评,祝圣诞快乐!
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PostPosted: 2010-12-27 07:32:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好黄先生,久违了:)
大作意味醇厚,深得五律体气,来学习。
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PostPosted: 2010-12-27 08:33:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

王兄,謝谢你的鼓励,好久不见,十分想念,并望拜读大作。
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PostPosted: 2011-04-11 12:58:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

附书法局部。装裱以后再拍全局。
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