黄洋界 探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-19 08:26:07 Post subject: 【五律】 咏海鸥 (有图) |
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五律 咏海鸥
万顷烟波里 忘机逐浪游
知风扬健翮 掠水浴清流
伴钓舒闲趣 追船豁远眸
云心凌浩荡 雪羽舞芳洲
_________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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白水 大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-19 08:30:15 Post subject: |
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开阔的胸襟,翱翔的文字 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
Posted: 2010-12-19 11:03:41 Post subject: |
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知风扬健翮 掠水浴清流
黄老师好联! |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-19 15:15:07 Post subject: |
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黄兄扬健翩,凌云舒远眸!
豁达、灑脱! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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黄洋界 探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-19 17:59:28 Post subject: |
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謝白水,庆宏,白云兄阅评。 _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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影沉寒水 举人
Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-20 02:09:15 Post subject: |
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自由自在的 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-20 02:37:25 Post subject: |
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万顷烟波里 忘机逐浪游
知风扬健翮 掠水浴清流
伴钓舒闲趣 追船豁远眸
云心凌浩荡 雪羽舞芳洲
名为咏鸥实为赋志也!学习欣赏并问好老师! |
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黄洋界 探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-20 08:31:00 Post subject: |
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謝寒水兄,笑聊兄賞阅。问好! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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宁家珍 秀才
Joined: 20 May 2009 Posts: 470 Location: 中国黄山 宁家珍Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-21 04:53:48 Post subject: |
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白水 Moonlight wrote: |
开阔的胸襟,翱翔的文字 |
欣赏,好诗,赞成白水老师的评点。问候诗友。 |
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黄洋界 探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-21 12:05:27 Post subject: |
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謝宁家珍评阅。问好! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-22 12:29:25 Post subject: |
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笑聊 wrote: |
万顷烟波里 忘机逐浪游
知风扬健翮 掠水浴清流
伴钓舒闲趣 追船豁远眸
云心凌浩荡 雪羽舞芳洲
名为咏鸥实为赋志也!学习欣赏并问好老师!
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呵呵,笑聊高见。
忘机一陶然! |
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黄洋界 探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-22 13:21:47 Post subject: |
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謝冰请賞阅,祝圣诞节愉快! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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胡恢宗 秀才
Joined: 15 Mar 2008 Posts: 564
胡恢宗Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-22 19:14:17 Post subject: |
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万倾烟波里,忘机逐浪游。云心凌浩荡,雪羽舞芳洲。----景美情真。向黄洋界老师问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞 |
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黄洋界 探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-22 20:02:57 Post subject: |
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谢謝评阅,望多交流。 _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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连南河 秀才
Joined: 30 Aug 2008 Posts: 342 Location: Toronto 连南河Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-23 20:40:39 Post subject: |
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笑聊写到:
名为咏鸥实为赋志也!
"云心凌浩荡 雪羽舞芳洲 " _________________ 一路雨丝一路风 |
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孟冲之 童生
Joined: 29 Jul 2010 Posts: 41 Location: 天涯海角 孟冲之Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-24 13:11:23 Post subject: |
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黄老师圣诞快乐!
诗越老越洒脱了 _________________ 不以心捐道,不以人胜天 |
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黄洋界 探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-25 08:23:14 Post subject: |
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谢连南河,孟冲之赏评,祝圣诞快乐! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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王君明 秀才
Joined: 03 Apr 2007 Posts: 250 Location: 甘肃天水 王君明Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-27 07:32:36 Post subject: |
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问好黄先生,久违了:)
大作意味醇厚,深得五律体气,来学习。 _________________ 虚拟网络 真实生活 |
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黄洋界 探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-27 08:33:56 Post subject: |
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王兄,謝谢你的鼓励,好久不见,十分想念,并望拜读大作。 _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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黄洋界 探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2011-04-11 12:58:23 Post subject: |
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附书法局部。装裱以后再拍全局。 _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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