| 墨望山 童生
 
 
 Joined: 12 Feb 2007
 Posts: 25
 
 墨望山Collection
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				|  Posted: 2011-01-07 06:08:30    Post subject: 清平乐 后山送友别 |   |  
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				| 清平乐 后山送友别 
 文-胡默
 
 风长月远
 古道寒菊乱
 更见西山孤飞燕
 长亭马蹄声慢
 
 曾记年少轻狂
 挽弓欲射天狼
 转眼风霜满面
 白头遥叹周郎
 
 
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		| 白云闲人 探花
 
 
 Joined: 26 Aug 2007
 Posts: 3466
 
 白云闲人Collection
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				|  Posted: 2011-01-07 07:48:44    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 婉约词风! 問好墨望山!
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 诗中岁月,
 笛里关山.
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		| 墨望山 童生
 
 
 Joined: 12 Feb 2007
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 墨望山Collection
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				|  Posted: 2011-01-07 19:30:44    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 呵呵,问好闲人,在下词拙句糙,多多指教。 |  | 
	
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		| 胡恢宗 秀才
 
  
 Joined: 15 Mar 2008
 Posts: 564
 
 胡恢宗Collection
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				|  Posted: 2011-01-08 19:53:42    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 上阙送友人,下阙赞友人。可见情深意长。 _________________
 水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞
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